增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today the number of the netizens in our country have increased rapidly, yet many of them do not pay enough attention to the family. It is no doubt that we benefit much from the Internet. For an example, it’s convenient for us to get the informations we need and communicate with our friends and relatives. Meanwhile, it could help us learn that is happening both at home and abroad. Therefore, no matter how attractive the Internet is, we shouldn’t separated from our loved ones. We should stop surf the Internet and spend time with our families, enjoying the time when you are together.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
With the Internet playing an important part in our daily life, more and more students can get access the Internet. They mostly use the Internet for three major purposes, among them seeking informations is the most popular. They also use it for communication and funny, such as watching movies and playing games. Beside, shopping online is gradually becoming part of their life. However, the Internet meanwhile bring about problems. Some students spend much time online games. Worst still, something unhealthy on the Internet does greatly harm to students. Thus, proper guidance should be giving on how to make a good use of the Internet.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My 71-year-old grandpa run a small food stand in a night market in my city, provide local snacks for people working overtime. Receiving payments has always been a problem for him before my help. He often had to feel in his pocket for changes on cold nights while keeping eye on food in the oven. After learning this I helped him set up with mobile payment apps like WeChat Pay and Alipay. My grandpa is content with which I did for him, for about 95 percent of his customers now pay with his phones. Mobile payment has become an essential part of our everyday life. It not only deep changes the life of young people, but also provides convenient for the elderly.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Smartphone apps certainly make our life easier. And now, it looks like they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a various of study aid apps aimed at student. Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of our schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. Convenient they are, these apps present problems with both parents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. Better still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. Therefore, this isn’t to say that study aid apps should be completely ban. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students to take the advantage of the study aid apps’ strengths and avoiding their weaknesses.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
If you are on the street,you would see all kinds of people passing by.It’s not rare to see people with bad manner.Some throw away rubbish casually.Some spits in public.Some even sit or lie on the ground without consider others’ feelings.All these behaviors really make us feel bad.
Personal,smoking in public places annoys me most.As we all know it,smoking does harm for people’s health.It is not only bad for smokers himself,but also a threat to the public health.It is hoped that an effective way can found to educate these people to behave good in public.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Is it all right students carry smart phones all the times? The opinions about that varies from person to person. Those for that think it is convenience for them to contact others, especially it is necessary in emergency.
Those like that, however, think students are not supposed to. In their opinion, some students can’t resist a temptation to play games and watch something improper for them at improper time, wasting their precious time they should spend studying and taking sports. Besides, to playing games may cost them too many. As far as I’m concerning, students should value their studies, and safety more than other things. As for relaxation, we would better do what is beneficial for both mind and body.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:I.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In most cases, the very first thing that we ask for when visit a cafe or friend's house is the WiFi password. It's almost like the internet has become one of your basic needs. And according to technology website Digital Trends, up to 60 percent of people in the world still didn't have an internet connection. The situation is even more worse in the least developed countries—only one tenth of the people has regular access to the internet. That's why in the recent survey in the US, 68 percent of the respondents think of internet access to a privilege instead of a human right.
However, the United Nations made this clear in a report back in 2011 that it believes internet access should be a human right, and it "should be a priority (优先考虑的事)for all states" to make sure everyone has access to the web.