In my spare time, I often read some books written by famous writers in or abroad. I ever read China’s Four Great Classical novel such as Journey to the West. Beside, I enjoy reading Tang poetry. I have been writing from I was nine years old. I am remember the first time my parents and I talked about my dream of becoming writer. They laughed out happy when they read the short story I write about robots. They think that my story is well worth read and that I am good at writing. I believe I will achieve their dream.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have planned an autumn outing for my class next week, and I’m writing to ask your permission.
First, the place where we’ve decided to visit — the Forest Park is not far away from the city. We can take a bus and ride a bike to get there. Second, the trip would provide us with a great opportunity to get close to the nature. Third, we need to spare some time to take some physical exercises. Some teachers as well as Mr. Wang is going to join us to make sure of our safe.
We are all looking forward to receive your permission. We will appreciate you if you can kindly give us an immediate reply.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I went on a hike with one of my best friend, Kevin. I got up early that morning and prepare lots of food in my lunchbox and then I went Kevin’s home to pick him up. On the way to the mountain, we enjoyed at seeing many beautiful flowers along the road. After we arrived at the mountain, all of us couldn’t help admire the natural scenery. Then he suggested that we should had a race between us, what made me excited too. So I agreed immediately. In an hurry, Kevin tripped on a stone and fell all the way down. Luckily, he got stuck on a tree and I pulled her up at last. What a day!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线_____, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last summer I went to a beach with my family. It was the first time that I have seen the sea, so I was very exciting when we arrived there. The sun was shining and the sea was so beautiful! I rushed the water quickly, that made me feel good. But about half a hour later, the sun was disappeared and it began to rain. The wave was kind of scary. My father asked me to go home. I wanted to stay, hoped that the rain would stop soon. But it didn’t, so I went home disappointedly, thinking of all the funs I missed. It was so a pity that he had only played for 30 minutes.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
China is a country that playing table tennis is quite popular. Wang Wei is fond about this sport. Malong is one of the great players in the world so that she admires him a lot. Those inspiring story of his success have encouraged children to practice table tennis at early age. Competitions are being organized for schools to compete against each other every year. Last year, Wang Wei was lucky admitted as a school team member. She worked hard and won the first place with her amazed performance. When she received the gold medal, a sense of pride arise in her heart. Since then, she has been dreaming of win more medals in the future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Helen,
Knowing that you are going to learn paper cutting in China, so I'm writing to recommend a excellent teacher, Miss Li to you. Recognizing as the best art teacher in our school, Miss Li is especially good at paper cutting. Every time he holds an exhibition, there are visitor from all over our country. She has taught many students which want to learn paper cutting, including me. Besides, Miss Li is patient but enthusiastic about teaching. I firmly convinced that you'll achieve a lot under her help. I sincere wish you good luck to be Miss Li's student.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My favorite sport is football. In my eyes, it is an unique form of sport. So I’m happy I am belong to our school football team. We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also sport taught us the importance of obedience(服从). Each player must obey the captain, that is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win a true wonderful match.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧) ),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My favourite English novel is Pride and Prejudice, which author is Jane Austen. In this novel, there is a girl called Lizzy and rich gentleman named Mr. Darcy. At first, they don't like each other, especially Lizzy. She thinks Mr. Darcy is rather proud and had done something cruel, so she hates Mr. Darcy. Thus, Mr. Darcy, somehow, falls in love about her and proposes to her. To her surprise, Lizzy refuses, because she has made up her mind that she will never marry with a man no matter how rich he is unless she truly loves him. Later, Lizzy realizes what Mr. Darcy is very kind and not proud at all. She hates him just due to her prejudice. Maybe you can guess the end of this novel: they get marry and lead a happy life.
It's said Pride and Prejudice is the most popular English novel in the world. If you haven't read it, I strong recommend it to you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a kid, I prefer to stay at home and read various picture books. I’d burst in laughter or frown with concern about the characters but the plot in the books. Later in life, I was absorbing in the world of words, where I found me seeing the world through different roles. While reading, I even learned how behave in the real world. Even though I met with a plenty of difficulties, nothing could prevent me from reading. Frank speaking, I harvested a lot from reading. It provided me with knowledges of different fields. Besides, it convinced me that living alone did not mean be lonely.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love reading English novels. At twelve, I was able to read a popular novel calling Harry Porter. In the past three years, my vocabulary expanded greatly. Undoubtedly, reading novels play a role in my vocabulary and spelling. So I advise that we English learner should spend some time read English novels every day. When you begin to read English novels, remember that it’s not necessarily to understand each word. Not every word is important in a sentence. After you come into the word several times, you will understand how it means. You can also improve yours grammar after reading many English novels. So why not to open up a whole new world of literature by reading English novels?