增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm sorry to know that you feel upset about having trouble in fit into the class in the new school. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be very shy to talk confidently with your classmates. Maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun your accent. However, it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally. As far as I was concerned, with your effort, you can manage to overcome your difficulties. To start with, you may as well learn to speak Mandarin, which can be good understood by all the Chinese. Besides, comparing note with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends. Last but not least, you had better take the part in more school club activities, that you can express your ideas and know about others. I do hope we can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible. Best regards.
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增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Hi, Tom,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior Grade Three in Qujing No.1 Middle School. Knowing that you show greatly interest in school life in China, I’d love to share with you our school life, hoped you’ll like it.
We are busy but our school life is colorful. We have many different clubs that students with the same interest gather together to discuss and communicate each other. Besides, we have many abundant extracurricular activities, such as basketball and football games. As one of the students who is graduating this June, I have to spend many of my time on study like doing test paper, reviewing the learned knowledge and so on. But in a second year of high school, I have much spare time to do what I liked.
I will greatly appreciate it if my introduction can make you to have a clear idea of the school life. Looking forward to your coming to China soon.
Kind regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am exciting and can’t wait to share with you an unforgettable experience. The lesson that I gave it for the first time will live in my memory forever. Seeing a young teacher enter the classroom, some of my student began to make much noise. I stood on the platform, feeling nervously and not knowing what to do. Then I realize that something must be done. I asked the kids whether they were fond English songs. After take a deep breath, I sang a song. To my surprise, all kids were such interested that they started focusing on my class. Now I have much confidence than before and realize the importance of staying calm. However, if you meet problems in the future, don’t worry. Believe in yourself and solutions will come up soon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’d like to share an unforgettable experience to you. With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, I felt increasing anxious. As a result, I couldn’t absorbed in study. Felt discouraged, I nearly lost heart. Then Miss Zhang had the face-to-face talk with me. She said, “In our life we all have some moment when we can’t achieve what we want. It was natural. You should turn them into motivation.” Her words were a great encouragement to me. After that, I worked even harder and was admitted to my most favorite university at last.
Optimistic attitude is that really matters. It can make us bravely enough to face challenges.
