增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
About how to keep healthy, I’d like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that can we keep fit.
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Hello, Peter. I'm very grateful for your concern about my coming exam. To tell you the truth, I have been busy prepare for the exam recently. Some classmates are feeling really nervous clue to the exam, but I don't take it so serious. I always learn in a relaxing mood and I'm making a great progress. Now that I had tried my best, it doesn't matter much to me which the result is.
In my opinion, we should keep a good balance among our study, rest or exercise. I believe we can be successful if we prepare for the exam by a proper way.
I'd appreciate if you could give me some good advices.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
I’m a middle school student. I am writing to tell you something around us.
Nowadays, as the development of China’s urbanization, thousands of people move into cities, leave their children at home. However, many of these left-behind children have problems, which always feel lonely or stressed out and are more likely make mistakes. They even behave illegal due to lack of their parents’ love and care.
How can we solve a problem? In my eyes, our government should balance the economic develop in different area. Besides, we can organize “hand-in-hand” activities to call on more people to help them. It’s very important for us to pay more attention to these children if you want to build in a harmonious society.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Wang Qiang
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, traveling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention to. You can find out more about your destination by surf the Internet before you set out. You needn’t take too many cash. Although it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using credit cards are much more reliable. In addition to, it will be wise of you to take umbrella in case it rains. And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understanding the cultural diversity. Keep in mind that being politely in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.
