增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, our school held the sports activity in order to developed our awareness of fitness. That morning, all the students and teachers had gathered on the playground. Then the headmaster announced the begin of the opening ceremony. After the opening ceremony, all kinds of events started one after others. The playground was alive with excitement. That drew the most attentions was a competition between students and teachers. Since then, the teacher-student relationship has been strengthened, but so has the awareness of sportsmanship. I’m convincing that the unforgettable activity will get us prepared a better future both mentally and physically.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Johnson is a friend of mine.I’m glad he changed greatly in the past two years.I clearly remember he was quite fat two years before.He got tired so easy that he couldn't take exercise, that made him very upset. Later, he realized unless he went on like that, he would end up achieve nothing.So he made up his minds to make a change.He went running every morning and played the basketball every afternoon. Besides, he followed a diet of more vegetables or less meat. Gradually he began to lose weight.He is now an energetic boy in good health. So when faced with problems, we should overcome it with great determination and strong willpower.