增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:(1)每句不超过两个错误;(2)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As science fiction offers surprise and exciting, I had a strong urge to read The Three- Body Problem written by Liu Cixin. The book, first releasing as a series in Science Fiction World magazine in 2006 in China, turned out to be a hit.
The book described the story of Ye Wenjie and Wang Miao, two scientists on the not distant future. Ye joins a secret project to contact aliens. Meanwhile, Wang registers or logs on to an online video game called “Three Body”. It has influenced minds deeply that people are worried about the possibility of the earth being invaded by an advanced civilization.
Curiously, I was referred to an online forum and concluded that the concern is necessary, at least for now. Which is declared by scientists, the chance of life beyond the earth develops into superior intelligence is quite slim.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43. 3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What was worse, 82. 8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, whom care for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practical advice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.
In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.
Last summer I have an unusual experience. It was raining hardly. Because of this, the river near my town rose but flooded some of the rice fields. The villagers, included me, went to the dam to make them strong. The PLA soldiers also came to help us. We fought hard for three days. On the end the dam was saved and our village protected from the flood. Though I became very tired after I returned home, but I was very happy. I learned many things from the villager and the soldiers. I also learned a lots from my unusual experience.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone. We’re senior three students now, and it’s time that every one of us starts considering what to do after our graduation. As the rapid development of our society, there are more and more jobs to choose from. But which one suits us better? Some jobs may seem dull and they are vital to our society while other might appear exciting but actually they are different and bored, and sometimes cause huge pressure to those which are involved in them. As result, when we think about future career, we should realize the important of all jobs. Please remember they together to help our society function well.
Last night, my family went out to eat to celebrate my brother’s new job. I notice our waitress was acting rather strangely. She kept forgetting to bring thing she was serving to customers. We comforted her and said it was OK when she apologized for not remember to bring my salad. In a fact, she had to help two new cooks beside providing services for customers. To show our encouragement, we decided leave a tip (小费) what was larger than usual. She was so moved and thanked them again and again. Seeing her final slow down to breathe and look less worrying, we were all very happy.
I enjoy learning English but can remember individual words easy. However, when it comes to reading comprehension, it’s really the challenge. Last weekend, I tried to read a storybook write in English to improve my reading. At first, I refer to the dictionary every time I came across a new word, which I found it not very helpful. I often felt puzzling about what I had read. Then I tried to finish a chapter completely with looking up the new words. What surprised me was I could understand the story merely from the context. I hope I will make great progresses in English in this way.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school decides to organize a project called “Vegetable Garden” days ago. Designing to raise our awareness of labor and give us a chance to get close to the nature, the project is meaningful. All classes are ready to active participate in the project. Each class will be given a piece of land, in what we can plant tomatoes, carrots and so on. We will water it every few days for them to grow well. In addition, it’s greatly importance to record vegetables’ growth. Best of all, we will taste the fresh food produced with our own hand. Every one of us are really looking forward to going our own land.
增加:在缺词加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, I felt terrible pain in different part of my body. When I touched my hand, I felt pain in the hand. When I touched my cheek, my cheek hurts. Wherever I touched, I felt the pain. I found this condition very frightened, so I saw a doctor but explained my strange condition. A doctor examined me and found nothing abnormal. She asked me to get a completely health check-up. All reports were quite normal, what made the doctor rather surprised. Suddenly the doctor realized something and asked myself to touch her hand. I touched her hand and still felt the pain. The doctor finally worked out to what my problem was — my finger injured.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Since I was little, I’ve been larger than other girl. I hated a way I looked. My anxiety drives me to try every means to lose weight, dieting and weight-loss pills including. This only brought me pain and poor health. Everything changed the moment when I came across the story a plus-size model, Tess Holliday. Although she’s larger than most other models, she has the confidence to be her. Her story has changed my ideas about that it means to be beautiful. My health, mentally and physical, is the most important thing. Isn’t it better that I’m large and happy, instead of skinny and healthy?
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线( \ ) 划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^ ),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:再错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
When I was young I want to become a traveler, so I really liked reading books which were introduced Many countries. They are so many places where I want to go, but if I must choose only one place, my choose is Morocco. There are three reasons why the Morocco is my favorite place. Firstly, Morocco is country in North African. I have never been to African, and I think there are many mysteries on this land than Asia or Europe. Secondly, Morocco is a famous place where many movies was made, such as ‘Casablanca’. Morocco had many nice places for sightseeing. Lastly, Morocco is much developing in business. I like all developed cities, besides they are always full of life. When I think over Casablanca or New York or other cities like them, I just feel very excitedly.