增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today was “School Safety”. It is no doubt that school safety is directly relate to students’ healthy growth and the happiness of millions of families. But what to guarantee school safety?
Firstly, to improve school safety, we should keep our classrooms, hallways and other school areas are organized and free of hazards. Secondly, the last person leave the classroom must keep locks on all doors and windows. Thirdly, raise fire safety awareness. While fire drills can seem repetitive at times, practice them seriously can cause the difference between safety and danger in the event of a fire emergency. Lastly, turn off all electrical equipment as soon as we don’t use them.
Let’s take action right now but make our own contribution to creating the safe campus!
Thanks for your listening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Wednesday, the teachers and students in Senior Three attended the grown-up ceremony holding in our school hall, which theme was “Growth and Responsibility”. First, a student representing all of us made an one-minute speech. He showed our sincerely thanks to our parents and teachers and talked about our dreams. Then, some teachers and parents offered to us their congratulations and expressed their expectations for ours future. Afterwards, wonderful performances were put on by students from a couple of class. Though the ceremony over now, it has made me realize clearly that I have grow up. I should be responsible to myself now. I will never forget this experience.
