增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, my British friend, Jim, spotted paper-cutting stand when we were wandering on the street. See such wonderful paper-cuts really amazed him, so he immediately decided to buy one. Therefore, the seller shook her head at the moment she saw the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to her. She had no change! How disappointed Jim was! He was about to quit while I took out my cellphone, scanned the QR code on the stand and pay 5 yuan. Jim was very surprising. I explained to her that nowadays we could pay with a cellphone for almost something. “Wow!” Jim said, “The paper-cut looks great, and the payment method seems even great!”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
Long time no see. Knowing that you will come to Beijing to study, and I recommend you an useful APP in our life—WeChat.
WeChat has become a big part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express our feelings instant at any time. Besides, it provided a chance for people release inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort. WeChat is also one of the most convenient and safe ways to pay. We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all. So, never will we worry about get fake notes or having to count changes.
I hope my recommendation can be in help to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I went shopping. I bought lots of eggs, some meat, and vegetable. When I checked out, the owner told me that a total price was 40.1 yuan. He told me to pay off only 40 yuan. After that, he scanned (扫描) my phone but then I left the store. On the way home, I cheeked my payment. It turns out that only 0.1 yuan was charged. I went back the shop at once and asked the owner how many he had charged me. Seeing the puzzling look on his face, I told him he had only charged 0.1 yuan. The owner realized his mistake and he repaid 40 yuan. It was obviously that the owner appreciated my behavior.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After my graduation in 2015, I joined in another university in Shanghai for further studies. I saw that people are more modern in this city. Whenever I went out with his Chinese classmates, I always saw them paying with their phone. With the help of my classmates, I final got my own account with Alipay, an online payment service launching by Jack Ma. It was very convenient and easy to use. However the amount, it can be done on Alipay. From thousands to only few cents, all can be easily transferred with a touch and two. Now, with the start of a new era, I always went out without my wallet.