增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jane,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some problems. As I tell you last time, I made three new friends here. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturday now and it really costs me many money. And now I start to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Yours,
Grace
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last winter vacation，some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends，while I chose to take parttime job to gain experience and earn some money.I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope.The pay were 10 cents per envelope.I headed for the company，feeling sure I would easy finish 300 envelopes in five hours and to earn the money.Actual，I only finished 200.Now，I fully understand how hard is to earn money.Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most students go to Internet bars play video games, that takes much of their precious time. Some students even stayed in Internet bars day and night, forgot their studies. No doubt these students will finally end up with their bright future destroy. Furthermore, some student log onto unhealthy websites accidental. And they are finally absorbed to the excitement of reading unhealthy stories or watching dirty videos. All these are harmful to the teenagers and if only this is not controlled or the use of the Internet is not properly guided, some of us will go the wrong way.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, I was walking along the street while a stranger stopped me and asked me the way to the new restaurant. I told him the route and direction carefully. As soon as I finish, the stranger thanked me a lot of and started off. However, to his surprise, he went at a wrong direction. Then I stopped the men at once and told him that he was wrong. Unexpected, he smiled and told me the truth which he didn't really want to ask the way. But instead he was just trying to know whether everyone knew exactly where the new restaurant, for he was the owner of the restaurant.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏间词符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（——），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11）不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target, Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
