增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I was glad to participate in an activity, which theme is Chinese weaving art, making me to have a taste of traditional Chinese culture deeply.
This activity held in my school library where I appreciated numerous art works, ranging from chairs to decoration. In addition, I was lucky enough to get a opportunity to learn what to weave Chinese knotting on the spot. During that time I was very enjoyable that I fell in love with the magical work immediate.
As far as I am concerned, not only do such activity make me further feel the beauty of the weaving art, but also it is beneficial to arise people’s aware of carrying forward traditional Chinese culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
My favourite inventor is Alexander Graham Bell. At a young age, Bell started to show much interest helping deaf people communicate, which led to their invention of the microphone. Beside, he also invented the telephone in 1876. However, at the beginning, what he actually tried to design was not a telephone but a multiple telegraph. During his search to improve the telegraph, Bell invents the first telephone. One of his most famous saying is: “Leave the beaten track occasional and dive into the woods. Every time you do so you will be certain to find something which is completely new in your life.” Indeed, what it was his acute curiosity that made his success. Bell was a honourable inventor all his life. He made his first invention at 11 but his last invention at 75.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our school holds a special traditional culture exhibition hall on last month. Yesterday, I was lucky enough visit the exhibition hall, where is on the fourth floor in the laboratory building. There are varieties of objects represented Chinese traditional culture displayed in the hall, such as Chinese instruments, the “scholar’s four jewels” but different kinds of Chinese drawings. To be honest, I am amazed at the richnesses of Chinese traditional culture. I am pride of being a Chinese. I strong recommend you to pay a visit to the exhibition hall. I am sure they will benefit a lot from it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Among the colorful after-school activity in our school, I like dancing best. I have been in a school dance club since the first week I came there. After school we practise dance on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and great enriches my campus life. I love dancing because of it is more than just moving your body for fun and joy. It is a way relieve stress and enjoy life. Beside, mastering any style of dance take hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person. I would not be that I am today without dancing after school.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our school organized a Traditional Culture Festival. Upon hearing this news, my classmates and I were exciting and decided to make Hanfu with newspapers. First, we surfed Internet for Hanfu’s original culture and different style. With much information collecting, we started to design our own Hanfu and got down to work. We cut the newspapers, stick the pieces together and even coloured it. Finally, when our showtime came, we walked along the runway wear our beautiful Hanfu and the audience cheered and applauded wildly. This activity gave to us a strong sense of achievement. More important, we developed a lot of proud for our traditional culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I know a professor who’s also a millionaire. A few years ago he have an important invention and made fortune. Although he was very successful, he didn’t forget the village children who was suffering from poverty and hungry. He could have lived comfortably so he donated all his money to a village school so that the children would not drop out. He also equipped teachers offices with furniture. Her ultimate goal was for all children to go to school. If he couldn’t do so, he would be feel guilty. The professor’s kindness has been appreciated for all. It is said that the professor has became a philanthropist(慈善家).
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am a 18-year-old middle school student. I seldom helped my parents for the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I began to think about what to do to help. Last Sunday, parents went out shopping. I suddenly got an idea: why not to give the rooms a thoroughly cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books and other things and put it in place. Then I wiped the dusty off all the furniture. Before that, I sweep and mopped the floors. At that very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tiring as I was, I felt very happy then.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Chris,
I am glad to hear you are interested on Double 11. Now let me to tell you something about them. Double 11 has become a special day in recently years. With four "1"s, it is also called Singles' Day. On that day, single young people held parties to show love or simply have funs. In 2009, Double Eleven Shopping Day was held to promoting online shopping, that has become the biggest online shopping day in China now.
In my view, this day is chance of promoting business. People should make purchases wisely. What do you think of this day? Look forward to your opinion.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, I went to Xi’an with two friend. We were excited about a trip. We spent third hours taking the train to Xi’an Railway Station. At first, we were confused about what to get out of the railway station. And then we saw a sign, which led them to take the subway. When we got to the subway station, some advancing ticket machines appeared in front of us, we bought our tickets quickly. When we were on the subway, we never thought it was such fast. It just took us ten minutes to reach to our destination, and we find our hotel soon.
