增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Chris,
I am glad to hear you are interested on Double 11. Now let me to tell you something about them. Double 11 has become a special day in recently years. With four "1"s, it is also called Singles' Day. On that day, single young people held parties to show love or simply have funs. In 2009, Double Eleven Shopping Day was held to promoting online shopping, that has become the biggest online shopping day in China now.
In my view, this day is chance of promoting business. People should make purchases wisely. What do you think of this day? Look forward to your opinion.
Yours,
Li Hua
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The winter holiday I am looking forward to is drawing near. I feel more than happier because I will have more time to make good use. With so many things to do, I had already made a plan. First of all, I will go to visit my grandparents. It was them who brought me up. Not having seen them for near six months, I missed them very much. When I come back, I’ll devote my time to go over the notes, what is of great help to my study. Through a month’s hard work, and I'm sure to make great progresses. How satisfying the result will be!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Thursday, I invited Alan to my house to spend the Mid-Autumn Festival. While we were wait for a big lunch, both Alan and I felt hungry. After having the big lunch, we felt full of energetic. In the afternoon, my mother taught Alan and me to make mooncakes, which made us especially exciting. We listened my mother carefully and made the mooncakes with great patience. At the last, we made some beautiful mooncakes. In the evening, we ate the mooncakes made by themselves and enjoyed my father’s stories about the festival. Late, Alan told me that he would never forget the day where we celebrated the Mid-Autumn Festival together. He hoped that he could spent many other traditional Chinese festival in my house.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
As the winter vacation is around the corner, our class has a discussion which topic is what to do during the holiday. Some are in favour of stay at home. They think it will be perfectly to celebrate the Spring Festival with our family members. Besides, they could save money for other purposes. But they will lose chance of getting to know more about the outside world. Therefore, others prefer to travel since it can increase their knowledges and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveled. In my view, it will be too much better to stay at home, because I will be able to do what I like.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ʌ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The new school year is around corner, so I need to buy something to my children and myself. Therefore, yesterday's afternoon I took them to a shoe store to buying some new shoes. My youngest kids wanted a pair of sports shoes and thus we bought one pair. My older son needed a pair of casual shoes for school. and we were found some on sale. The first pair which he tried on was a little small. so he put on other pair. and they fitted him perfectly. My daughter wanted beauty dress shoes and she got some high heels. I myself bought some boots because my old ones were wearing out.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
To whom it may concern,
I am one of your customer. I am unwilling to complain, and your service really annoys me. I order a set of Bookworm Series on your website the other day, but not until yesterday I receive it. Much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters bad, it was not a complete set, as I found one book missed.
I am sorry to have received such poor service. I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with a problem. I hope that you either return my money back or deliver a new set of books to me. Therefore, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complain.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Wang Ling
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Manager，
This is a letter of complaint concerned the actions of one of your online store．Last Sunday，October 29th，I buy a dress from a store on your website．But I was not satisfied with the dress when I received it，so I decided to return it．But the salesman refused my request in a rudely tone．I explained the reason that I wanted to return it，but he said he was busy and didn’t have time to deal it．Now he isn’t replying to us at a11．
I feel that the salesman was impolite．I hope that you can look into for the matter．I have bought lots of things on your website and I look forward to a much pleasurable shopping experience next time．
Yours，
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the development of the Internet, shopping online is more and more popular. People spend lots of money online, especially on Single’s Day when the sales volume reaches an unexpected level, that astonishes everyone. Some people are in favor of it. Shopping online never failed to fascinate people because its great convenience. However, it offers the wide range of goods to people and they can get almost whatever they want online. On the contrary, some think it makes people to waste more money with the increasingly eagerness for buying more. They often find what they’ve bought can rarely be used in his daily life.
As far as I’m concerned, it’s amazed to shop on the Internet. After all, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. What really counts for people is to buy better goods with low prices.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some students think high of live-streamed lessons, which make learning more flexible, when others point to the many disadvantages such as low efficiency. As far as I am concerning, live-streamed lessons are only good for extremely self-disciplined students, but do no good to those lacked in self-control. Firstly, many students cannot stop themselves from playing their phones, which influenced their learning efficiency. Secondly, students need an environment which they are motivated to be devoted to learning, but live-streamed lessons do not provide us with such an environment. To sum up, live-streamed lessons what have a lot of disadvantages and is not fit for all.
