增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On our way to the theatre for a movie yesterday, a friend of me felt a bit low. I knew her day had been a bit challenged. Soon we had passed by some trees with beautiful fall colors but the sun was shining down on them. When I showed the breathtaking scene to her, her mood started to change quick. She was so keen about the colors that she took several picture. Smiles also appeared in her face. And she chatted with me happily for long time. Honestly speaking, this is a good reminder whether nature is always there to comforting us and lift our spirits.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, Mrs Hong went to the car park to get her car.When she got to the car park, she finds that someone had stolen his car. So she rushed to the police station and told the police about it. So, the next morning, the car was in its usual parking places in the car park. Inside the car was a note, "We are sorry that we stole your car. We really needed it for an emergence(急事) trip the hospital.
Please receive these two tickets for Saturday’s show at the Great Theater.Mrs Hong’s husband said, "Criminals(罪犯) are a lot more politely now. They are educating people." So they went to the show. When they returned back home, there was nothing leaving in the house except a note, "Hope you will enjoy the show!"
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I admire the cellist Yo-Yo Ma. Born in Paris, France, in 1955, Ma started playing the cello the age of four. When he was seven, he moves with his family to New York City. They attended the Juilliard School, and then that he studied at Harvard University. Ma performed such professionally while studying that he started to become famously. Ma dreamed of connect people around the world through music. And in 1998, he founded an organization calling the Silk Road Project, through what Ma gives cross-cultural music performances with musicians from places like Iran, Mongolia, and Italy. Through his work, Ma has helped people all over the world appreciate various type of music.
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My family went on a trip to Mount Huang in Anhui, famous for its amazing sceneries, during the Mid-Autumn Festival this year. It takes us about five hours to get here by train. Once we reached the foot of the mountain, we got down to climb it. My parents and I were great impressed by the beautiful views along the way. About three hours late, we finally got to the top. We had lunch there and the food was tasted really delicious. We both enjoyed ourselves on that day but the trip was a truly unforgettable experience. To tell you truth, it is fantastic to be with my family.
