增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At present the computer is playing a important role in our daily life. By use the computer, we are able to learn about some other information as well as news both home and abroad. We can also make phone calls, send messages by e-mail, go to net schools, but learn foreign languages by yourselves. Besides, it can make us to enjoy music, watch sports matches, and play chess or cards. The computer can even help us do some shopping online, have a chat and makes friends with strangers, who greatly improves our living level. In a words, since it appeared, our life has become much easy than before.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big house to raise some horses. They also had a small pond (池塘), which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As it is known to all, China is the home of tea. It has been spread from China to world. With a historic of four or five thousand years, tea culture has been an important part in Chinese culture. Wherever guests visit, it is a custom to serve tea with them. Drinking tea had a lot of advantages, one of which is to help you refresh yourself and improves thinking ability. Beside, drinking tea every day is said to be able to help you keep health and live longer. What's most, some kinds of tea can even help people lose weight and become beautiful, which may appeal to a lot of lady.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I used to being very scared of people who were different from those I grow up around. Last year, my parents took me to France, when I was surrounded by foreigner. I was very nervous at first. But as I observed them, I found that as if I could not understand their languages, they seemed to be said and doing the same kinds of things we say and do in my country. I even talked to few Europeans, who were very friend. Although people are not exactly the same, we are still basically the same, so it is no need to be afraid of someone just because of they come from a different culture.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号( ^ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;把多余的词 用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I've always been dreaming of visiting Chicago. Last summer I took trip there on my own, what got me thinking about the advantages of travelling alone. Something that I noticed immediately was the fact that I had the free to do what I wanted. After all, I don't have to consider another person's interests. While in Chicago, I got involving in a couple of workshops. During these workshops, we got the chance to talk with the local people. Days late, I went to the theatre alone and found myself having a conversation about travel with the lady sit beside me. To be honest, these conversations wouldn't have been happened if I had travelled without a friend.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
The rest of Elias’ story
You cannot imagine what the name of Robben Island made us afraid. It was a prison from where no one escaped. There I spent the hardest time of my life. But when I get there Nelson Mandela was also there and he helped me. Mr. Mandela began a school for those of us who had few learning. He taught us during the lunch breaks and the evening when we should have been asleep. We read books under our blankets and used anything we could find make candles to see the words. I became a good student. I wanted to study for my degree and I was not allowed to do that. Later, Mr. Mandela allowed the prison guards to join in us. He said they should not be stopped from studying for their degrees. They were not clever than me,but they did pass their exams. So I knew I could get a degree too. That made me feel good about me.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词的下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a big fire in one office buildings in our neighborhood at about nine o'clock last night. Many firemen and fire engines come. In a beginning, we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the six floor. We also heard the explosion the gas tank mix with the noisy sounds from the windows. Soon the fire spread one by one to the floors above, but finally reached the top floor. Many people stood outside on the streets watch the fire in horror. Unluckily there was no one in that office building when the fire broke out in.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
No one knows exactly how the earth began, as it happened so long ago. However, according to a wide accepted theory, the universe began with a "Big Bang" that threw matter in all direction. For several billion years after the "Big Bang", the earth was still just a cloud of dust. It is even more important is that as the earth cooled down, water began to appear on its surface. Water had also appeared on another planets like Mars but, like the earth, it had disappeared later. What many scientists believe is that the continued presence of water allowed the earth to dissolve harm gases and acids into the oceans and seas. This produced a chain reaction, that made it possible for life to develop. Many millions of years later, the first extremely small plants began to be appear on the surface of the water. Later reptiles appeared the first time. After that, dinosaurs developed. They lay eggs and existed on the earth for more than 140 million years.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday,I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school.I was about to help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me,saying that I might be accused of knocking him down.Heard his words,I began to hesitate and slowed down my step.At the same time,another student,who saw everything,went up to help.The old lady said nothing but lots of thanks to the good boy.I felt ashamed.As is know to all,helping others are forever a good virtue.Even some old people are becoming immoral(不道德的),we can't let it to disappear.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At 3:42 one of the greatest earthquake of the 20th century shook Tangshan. It seemed as if the world was at the end. A huge crack that was eight kilometers long and thirty meters wider cut across houses, roads and canals. Steam bursts from holes in the ground. Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt. In fifteen terrible seconds a large city lay in ruin. The suffering of the people was extremely. Two-thirds of them died and injured during the earthquake. The number of people killing or injured reached more than 400,000. After the earthquake, everywhere the survivors looked nearly everything was destroyed. Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves and sand was now filled the wells instead of water. People were shocking and they felt hopeless.