增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
Long time no see. Knowing that you will come to Beijing to study, and I recommend you an useful APP in our life—WeChat.
WeChat has become a big part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express our feelings instant at any time. Besides, it provided a chance for people release inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort. WeChat is also one of the most convenient and safe ways to pay. We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all. So, never will we worry about get fake notes or having to count changes.
I hope my recommendation can be in help to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone. Welcoming to Enjoy Your Life again. Today I’d like to introduce a special camp to you during your summer break. OK, now, let me bring them to you. Greenwood, a magical literature camp for a young, is open to boys and girls of grade five to seven. The basic idea is bring together teenagers to take part in lots of fun team-based activities. Students of all abilities get together for two weeks and read novels as well as learn what to write poems in teams. At the end of the camp, each of the students have his/her own works. Come and share the literature experience in Greenwood. It is real a big chance for all literature fans. Are you ready to join in us?
If you’re interested but want to join, please call us.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Kate,
I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sorts of photo in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, through which it is very convenient for us to communicate with. However, there exists some potential risks if we overshare. One severe problem is leaking privacy, that may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, never should we post our personal information, nor should we blindly add strangers to a list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books and taking exercise.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As one of the most popular short-video platforms in China. Kuaishou had gained millions of users and children are also including. As we all know, spending too much time watch short videos or playing online games is no good to the young. However, the app appeals to the public to ensure children register with our own identities. In this way, the app can automatically limit the time and help the young use it more proper. It is believed what this policy will be great benefit to those who are under age. Also, the young may get knowledges from the app to improve themselves. Every coin has the two sides. Some youngsters argue this policy may lead to the leak of their privacy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Have you ever thought about working and traveling at the same time? Programs like Work and Travel USA and the Working Holiday allows young people to earn extra money while is traveling abroad. People older than 18 and younger than 28 can apply with Work and Travel USA. Then, those choosing are required to have an interview with the program manager in English. Interesting, fluent English is not the single factor what keeps them in the program. What also mattered is their passion and willingness to share. Do some studies of these interesting programs since you set off for any of your journey. You will be surprised that the world can explored in such a special way.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, I was browsing TikTok when a short video drew my attentions, which exactly showed people how to make an amazed fruit plate. Then I decided to give them a try. First I collected some fruits like apples, oranges, grapes, strawberries or bananas. After washing and peeled them, I focused the creation which took me about thirty minutes. To my delight, I won highly praise from my parents for that I had made. Making a fruit plate not only relaxes my mind but improve my practical abilities. I can't to wait to make another nutritious fruit plate.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
My favorite TV program
My favorite TV program is Chinese Poetry Competition. The show has enjoyed greatly popularity since it launched by CCTV in 2016. Chen Geng from Beijing University had a outstanding performance but came out on top in this year' s season final. This TV show not only remind audience of those classic Chinese poem but also helps them truly appreciate the beauty and fun of poetry. That impresses me most is Flying Orders in the show, which I think is very dificul. This program lets me to enjoy the happiness brought by poetry. Afer watch the program, I begin to fall imto love with poems.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, many students are worshipping stars so blind that they don’t care about how the stars do. It is really a pity that some fans lose them in the process.
Here are some suggestions giving to the fans. Firstly, please worship stars sensibly. Never try to do some stupid and even crazy things for our stars. Next, be aware of a most important task of a student. Everyone is supposed to studying hard at present. Last but not least, why not to worship the stars around us? There are some super stars we can communicate in reality, such as our parent and the medical workers.