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Dear Mr Green,
I have returned to my motherland. Thanks to your help, I have made a great progress in my English study in your country for half a year. However, you advised me eat more vegetables and fruits instead of junk food and I am healthy than before.
You said you are interested in Chinese traditional festival. Now let me tell you everything about the Qingming Festival. It falls in April 5th every year and people go to clean graves in honor of the dead.
I hope you and your wife will pay a visit to China during the Mid-Autumn Festival which you can admire the moon and enjoy the moon cakes.
I’m looking forward to receive your letter!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
It is interested to visit another country, but sometimes there are some questions when we don’t know the language very well. It may be difficult to talk about the people there. We may not know how to use the telephone in the country which are visiting. We may not know what to buy the things we need. In a strange country we may not know where to eat and what to order in a restaurant. It is not easy to decide how many money to tip (付小费) waiters or taxi drivers. When we are helpful,we may not know how to ask help. After a short time later, however, we learn what to do and what to say. We learn to enjoy life in another country, and then we may be sorry to leave both the place and the people.
Dear Mike,
How are you?I am so glad to tell you anything about the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is a traditional festival with a long history in China. It is of very popular and is also celebrated in much other Asian countries. The festival fell on the 15th day of August in the lunar calendar or is celebrated in different ways. It is a time to get together with family and friends. People usually have a get-together, enjoy a large meal. In the evening, people talk and eat moon cakes under the beautiful moon. Children prefer to listen to fairy tales while adults appreciate bright full moon in the open air. The moon is a symbol of reunion, lucky and wealth. It is also a custom to express best wish to people they love at this particularly time.
Welcome to China to enjoy this festival with us one day.
Yours,
Zhang Feng
I like the Spring Festival, during that I usually enjoy myself greatly. All the family member often get together to have a big dinner. We also visit our relatives or friends. To my great joy, my grandparents always gave me some lucky money. Last year, I spent the Spring Festival happily as usual, but one thing made me surprising. My grandparents didn’t give me lucky money at first! It seemed that they had forgotten about them. Seeing I was puzzled, my grandpa laughed at. Several minutes late, my mobile phone received message. It was my grandpa who sent lucky money to me secret through WeChat! How cool and humorous my grandpa was!
It is well known that one of the aims of UNESCO is to protect and preserve culture and natural heritage. Our heritage is the precious gift, and it is also that we live with today. I believed some of you may have visited Mount Tai and Mount Huang, or have been to Jiuzhaigou. Many people just find unbelievable that so beautiful places exist in this world.
These heritage site impress visitors with their amazed beauty, and they are a great source of inspiration. There are altogether more than over 900 World Heritage Sites. People have come to understanding the truth that they do not belong to any single person, and to all mankind.
The Mid-Autumn Festival fall on the 15th of the eight month in Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoyed great popularity in our country. Usual, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come to home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brighter in the whole lunar month. That we love most is the moment when we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in night sky, we sit together, eating mooncakes and fruit and sharing their stories. In addition to these traditional activity, we have a variety of choices such as travelling or visiting our relatives or friends.
Several days ago when I went shopping in New York I saw an old woman crossed the street with a heavy bag in her hand. At that moment,the American boy was standing nearby. I thought the boy will help the old lady,and to my surprise,he did nothing. This seemed very strangely to me.
Later my roommate explained the boy's behaviors to me. Americans place emphasis to independence. If the boy had offered to help her,the old woman would have felt that she had considered old and weak. What the boy did it allowed her to keep her independence, that was more important to her than the discomfort of carrying a heavy load.
My name is Ann. I've been in China in a few years. With the help of Li Hua, a good friend of mine,I've been used to live in China. Li Hua, like other girls, are beautiful and lovely. We became friends after we meet each other a few years ago. Although her English isn't easy to understand, but we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about my favorite books. We're both surprising that Chinese culture and American culture are such different. Now we are planning nice party. There, I will introduce Li Hua to my friends, whom also have great interest in Chinese culture.
Dear Tom,
I heard that you've just moved here. As one of our traditional festival and the one that receives great popularity,today was the Dragon Boat Festival. Fall on the 5th day of the lunar month of May every year,it is set in praise on an ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan. Her poems are supposed inspire people's love of their country. Zongzi,boiling rice wrapped by bamboo leaves,is the famously food that you can't miss during the festival. Since you are busy with your work all the day long,I have specially cooked some for you. Unless it is convenient,I'll give it to you tonight. I'll be very happy if you like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
The Spring Festival, also knowing as the Chinese New Year, is a tradition festival in China. The Spring Festival usually falls in late January or early February. People celebrate them in different ways.
I always come back to home to celebrate the festival with my family. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all the family members will get together or have a big dinner. Then, while watching the Spring Festival Gala, we will play games and talk about which has happened recently until midnight.
On first day of the New Year, people usual wear new clothes and visit their relatives. They said “Happy New Year!” to each other, which is a good way to express their best wish for the coming year.