增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
Last Sunday, I visited to a forest park of our city with my friend Tom. It took us about twenty minutes to ride there. Upon arriving, we took a picture at the gate of a park first. Then we begin our trip. Breathed fresh air, we observed many kinds of trees, some of which we had never heard of before. In addition to plants, we also fascinated by strange stones and various public facility in the park. However, which attracted me most was the fountain in the middle of a lake. On our way back, all of us were very excited. But we're looking forward to enjoying the nature scenery again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Classical Gardens of Suzhou are a perfect combination of wonders and go on the List of World Heritage in 1997. People regard it as the sign of Confucian belief of harmony between man and nature. The unique aspect about the gardens are the poetic atmosphere creating in such a limited space. And most objects are artificial made. People create fantastic scenery, using many man-made structure such as rivers, rocks and plants. Rocks arranged in an order look meaningful while rivers, what go through the gardens, give the feeling of liveliness. The few pieces of leaves or flowers are enough to make us feel the change of the weather. We can get close nature here.
增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like traveling and my dream of visit Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. In October 1st, I went to Tian’anmen Square with my parents, there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feeling extremely exciting. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.
