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I am more than glad to tell you about my trip in Xi’an, a capital city of Shaanxi Province.
What impresses me deep are its natural scenery and long history. First, as it is known to the world, Xi’an has a long history and the birthplace of Chinese civilization. Its cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as so many historical sites, help Xi’an enjoy the title of “Natural History Museum”. The Terracotta Warriors, as example, are praised as “the eight wonder of the world”. Second, it is in a favorable georgraphical location surrounding by the Wei River and Qinling. I have also climbed Mount Hua, one of the five most famous mountains in China, what is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and unique characteristics.
It is really worthy visiting, and I’m looking forward to your coming.