增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. Like everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
It is interested to visit another country, but sometimes there are some questions when we don’t know the language very well. It may be difficult to talk about the people there. We may not know how to use the telephone in the country which are visiting. We may not know what to buy the things we need. In a strange country we may not know where to eat and what to order in a restaurant. It is not easy to decide how many money to tip (付小费) waiters or taxi drivers. When we are helpful，we may not know how to ask help. After a short time later, however, we learn what to do and what to say. We learn to enjoy life in another country, and then we may be sorry to leave both the place and the people.
Last weekend, I went to visit my uncle, which lives in Qingdao, with my parents. They took the train and got there on Friday afternoon. It was comfortable train ride and we enjoyed the wonderful view along the railway. On Saturday, it rains a lot, so we had to stay at home. While the adults were chatting, I played card with my cousins. Unluckily, it was sunny on Sunday. We went to the beach together but played in the water. The beautiful sea and fresh air made us very happily and relaxed.
How a wonderful experience! I hope for to be close to the sea again.
In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.
It was a long and bored journey. But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe them.
The streets are clean but the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as long as it's permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too careful when cross the street.
This year I had the chance to do a lot of travelling around Europe. It is wonderful to be able to go to different countries, listening to different languages and try local food. I’ve personally noticed how differently I am since I started exploring more. Travelling has made you much more confident or independent. Travelling also helps me develop my organization skills! It is important to figure out why to get to different tourist places and plan to my time wisely. On the other hand, it is nice to learn to relax. On top of that，it was a great way to meet new people from all over world. I have met so much strange and wonderful people this way. What’s more, I have made friend with many of them.
Recently, while browsed a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on. I get to know your wishes which you intend to travel in Harbin during the summer vacation with a Chinese student like your guide.
Learning this news, I am absolute willing to travel with you and introduce Harbin to you. I know as a brilliant guide I was supposed to make your journey interesting and meaning. For one thing, I will keep your company to visit numerous great place of interest and enjoy the wonderful sightseeing. For the another thing, I am going to tell you something of Harbin’s history.
Dear Li Hua,
I’m very glad to hear from you, know that you are going to visit America. FI1 be free at that time and I was eager to meet you. Please tell me your flight number and arrival time so that I can pick you up at the airport. You are welcome to stay at my house, which you can meet my parents.
My plan go like this. During the first few days, I’ll take you to New York to show you around some place of interest, thus helping me know more about American history. But in the following days, we’ll go to California, one of most beautiful states in America. It will be amazed to experience the traditional customs and beautiful scenery there.
If you have any suggestions, please write back down to me.
Yours,
Smith
Dear Jenny，
How was everything going？I，together with my parents plans to take a trip to Canada for a week during the summer vacation. We hope to make the full use of this opportunity to experience the naturally beauty of Canada and learn more about its culture. We don’t want to go to places where are full of tourists and shoppers. Because I am writing to ask help. We hope you can tell them where to visit. Besides, can you give us some advices on how to finding hotels which are not expensive but comfortable? I would be grateful if you could give me an early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Last summer I had chance to visit Paris. That attracted me most was the Eiffel Tower, which has became a symbol of France. I was deep impressed by its height. I had never seen such a tall building before! It is made of iron and it is about 10,000 tons in weight. There are 1,665 steps from the bottom to the top. Climb the tower made me very tired, and I was very excited. I took a lot of photo in Paris.
I have much memories and experiences to share with. I am so lucky to have seen such a culture so different from my own. I would remember my trip to France forever!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the winter vacation, I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I hope the mountain village will become better and better.
