Dear Jenny,
How was everything going?I,together with my parents plans to take a trip to Canada for a week during the summer vacation. We hope to make the full use of this opportunity to experience the naturally beauty of Canada and learn more about its culture. We don’t want to go to places where are full of tourists and shoppers. Because I am writing to ask help. We hope you can tell them where to visit. Besides, can you give us some advices on how to finding hotels which are not expensive but comfortable? I would be grateful if you could give me an early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
What people need is love and support, especially some special group of people. Here is my loving ideas for students with difficulty in learning.
I think the main problem with most of whom is that they lack of motivation. So we may help them to get motivated by setting goal for them or then work together towards it. Meanwhile, we can give them as more help as possible, sharing good study methods with them or solve problems for them. What's more, we should always encourage them to believe in ourselves. Confidence, what we all know,is absolutely vital to learning.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Let me make a suggestion to help you deal with difficult situation. If, for example, you are taking part at a sports competition or meeting someone important, you will probably be quite nervous. And you will worry that you won’t as successfully as you would like to be. What we need to do are prepare yourself thoroughly by running through the whole activity over and over again in your mind, carefully going through every detail. For example, a famous pianist, put in the prison for seven years for political reasons, can still play wonderfully when he was set free. When asking how he managed to play so well, his explanation was what he had practiced every day in his mind.
第一节 短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
What should you do when your parents become angrily? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will try to change. But they will take some times to change because they always get angry, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they don’t expect — like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable, and have him or her help you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am fond the summer holiday. Last summer, I go to Hawaii for my holiday. I often had a walk along the beach after the supper or had a swim in the afternoon. They sky was blue, and the air was fresher. Whenever you went, you could saw the green trees and the colorful flowers. The food in Hawaii was delicious and the people was friendly, too. The holiday was really wonder. I will never forget the days when I spent in Hawaii. I enjoy travel across the world. I hope I can meet different people and visit different place of interest some day in the future.
Last Sunday, almost all the school staff and student in our school have paid a visit to Hanyangling Museum. It is about 10 kilometers away from our school.
We started off at 8:00 am from our school gate, so the whole journey took us two hours. We visited the museum about ten o'clock. when features the history of our hometown. Be-sides, we enjoyed the beautifully scenery outdoors. Before having some photos taking and a picnic together, we returned to school on foot. Though the hike made us tiring, it provided us with a opportunity to take in the area’s great winter scenery.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. Which is known to everyone, it’s the famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very exciting. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting palaces and temples, and told stories. On the way I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came before we knew it. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. We all thought Emei Mountain was worth of visiting.