增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last month, I as well as my parents were invited to my uncle’s home in Beijing. My uncle, whose moved to Beijing when I was five, has been living there for nearly ten years. He meets us at the airport. The moment I arrived Beijing, I was so exciting. In the following days, we visited some places of interest and took photos in the front of Tiananmen Square. We both enjoyed visiting the Forbidden City because it deep impressed us. For me, this is one of the most rewarding trip I have ever made in my life and I am looking forward to go there again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, my mother and I visit beautiful Huangshan. We climbed to the top of the mountain. The mountain was so much high that it seemed to being in the clouds. Huangshan was full with hard rocks. We were surprising to see pine trees (松树) growing in the cracks of it. On arriving at the highest point of the mountain, we saw a sea of clouds, what was really unpredictable. Sometimes it looked like hundreds of horse and sometimes it looked like waves in a sea. We were complete amazed by the beautiful scenery.Never we forget the beauty of Huangshan.
I couldn't be happy to hear your intention to come to China for vacation, during which time you will able to have a taste of our unique "Red Culture".
Actually, here in my hometown exists some ideal spots that suit your need. The city of Jing Gangshan, situated in the southwest of Jiangxi province, which is well known to a continuous stream of travelers as its scenic view as well as historical significance. With breathtaking scenery or rich "Red Culture" resources, it is certainly my top choice. You can visit a couple of local museum, which will help you have a good knowledge of the revolutionary history.
I am sure it will be the wonderful experience and I can't wait to exploring its charm with you.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the weekend parents and I paid a visit to Datong City by train. We arrive there at about 9 am. First we went to a ancient temple, in that we saw some impressive Budda statues. It is small but beautiful. So we stayed here for nearly two hours. Then we left for the temple to go downtown. You can't imagine what crowded the street was! My parents bought some souvenirs in the local market. Meanwhile, I collected some postcard and funny toys. As we know, Datong is famous for its noodles, so we couldn't wait to taste some in a restaurant decorating traditionally. At 5 pm, we came back home happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\），在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用横线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The Olympic Games will be held in our country in four years' time. As a great many of people will be visiting the country, the government will be building new hotels, a immense stadium, but a new Olympic-standard swimming pool. They will also be building new road and a special railway line. The Games will be held just outside the capital and the whole area will be called 'Olympic City'. Workers will have complete the new roads at the end of this year. By the end of next year, they will have finished work on the new stadium. The fantastic modern buildings have been designed by Kurt Gunter. Everybody will be watching anxious as the new buildings go up. We are all very exciting and are looking forward the Olympic Games so they have never been held before in this country.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer vacation I travelled to America and I met a lot of foreigner. I found a tour guide which spoke both English and Chinese because of I was not confident with my English. Interesting, some native English speakers joined me in the trip. When we are in the Coronado Canyon, we lost contact with our guide but everyone was worried. All of sudden, my phone rang and it was from the guide, said that he would wait for us at the gate of the Canyon. He asked I to inform the other members. I collected my courage to tell them in English, and then I was praising by them. I felt more confident afterwards.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I took a trip to China a few months ago. It was a wonderful experience where is beyond description. We spent three weeks visit Beijing, Shanghai and several other tourist attraction. The closer we approached the center of China, the much I liked it. Then we went to Hong Kong last week, which I think is different with Beijing. It is noisiest place I have ever seen. And another thing that give me a deep impression was the people in China---they were so friendly. In one word, but the trip itself was interested. I can't wait to flying to China again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I’m happy to heard from my friend Tom, knowing he's coming to China. I'll write to him a letter about his journey.
Of the two trips to the Great Wall and the Palace Museum, both are good choice. Personally, I prefer the tour to the Great Wall. As is known, it is symbol of Chinese civilization. As a Chinese saying going, “He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.” By visiting it, people are surely to have a good knowledge of the hard－working Chinese people. Beside, the scenery along the Great Wall is amazing. That's because I think the trip to the Great Wall will be a good choice.
Hopefully, my suggestion will satisfy your need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I took a trip to China a few months before. It was a wonderful experience where is beyond description. We spent three weeks visit Beijing, Shanghai and several other tourist attraction. The closer we approached the center of China, the much I liked it. Then we went to Hong Kong last week, which I think is different with Beijing. It is noisiest place I have ever seen. And another thing that give me a deep impression was the people in China—they were so much friendly. Anyway, the trip itself was interested. I can't wait to flying to China again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It’s a long time since we meet last time. I couldn't be happy to hear your intention to come to China for vacation, during which time you will be able to have a taste of our unique “Red Culture”.
Actually, there exist some ideal spots in my hometown what suit your need. The city of Nanchong, situates in the northeast of Sichuan Province, which is well known to a continuous stream of travelers as its scenic view as well as historical significance. With breathtaking scenery or rich “Red Culture” resources, it is certainly my top choice. You can visit a couple of local museums, which will help you have good knowledge of the revolutionary history.
I am sure it will be a wonderful experience and I can't wait to exploring its charm with you.
