Dear Sally,
I am extreme pleased that you are visiting Xi’an this summer vacation. I’d like to express your warm welcome and offer you a few suggestion. Xi’an had a long history and 13 dynasties, included Western Zhou, Qin, Western Han, Sui and Tang, made Xi’an their capital. There are plenty of places of interest in Xi’an, among where the Terracotta Army is the most attractive. Besides, visiting the Big Wild Goose Pagoda and Shaanxi History Museum are the best choice. If you are hiking lover, you can climb the Cuihua Mountain, on top of which you can get a wonder view of our city. By the way, you had better to taste famous Xi’an snacks.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Postcards always spoil my holidays. Last summer, I go to Italy. I visited museums and sat in public gardens. A friend waiter taught me a few word of Italian. Then he lent me an book. I read a few lines, but I did not understand a word. Every day I thought about postcards. My holidays pass quickly, but I did send cards to my friends. On the a last day I made a big decision. I got up early and buy thirty seven cards. I spent a whole day in my room, but I did not write a single cards!
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Last summer, I went on the trip to Qingdao, where I stayed for seven days and enjoyed myself. Before leave Qingdao, I went fishing on a beautiful lake. Unlucky, I didn’t catch any fishes, and I got boring. I decided to go swimming. When I stood up, my wallet with all my money fell into the water. I jump into the deep lake to look for it, so I found nothing. The next morning, I wasn’t able to leave the hotel because of I had no money to pay for anything. I had no alternative but call my parents and asked for help. They sent myself some money by WeChat. How an embarrassing trip!
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To make our life colorful and enjoyable, our school organizes a cycling tour last Sunday, what turned out to be an unforgettable experience. As planning, we, together with our teachers, set off at 7:30, rode all the way, and finally arrived at the People’s Park safely. To start, we held a race down the bicycle path around the lake, and it provided us with a great fun. Then we appreciated the fascinating scenery. What’s most, the teachers took a lot of precious photo for us. Not only did this activity refresh our minds, and we fully experienced the pleasure of outdoor sports. Tired as they were, the meaningful ride strengthened the relationship among us. What a wonderfully cycling tour!
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People always say that us lack the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree completely. I woke up very early and decided to take a walk on last Friday. In the square where much senior citizens were dancing, I find several elders absorbed in feeding birds. Without many cars producing smog on the street, I realized that the city was such clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorated pretty well, which used to be old but out of style. On all sides of the street were big trees covering the whole city, making it comfortable to walk in the city. At that moment, I found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!
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My parents and I went to a park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We both waited for a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eager to see the fierce animals that I quickened my step through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for them, and I had no luck. Even bad, I had no money with me, which meant I had to walk home. How an awful experience!
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Last month, our family took trip to Hong Kong. When we reach Hong Kong International Airport at night, we took a taxi to the hotel we had been booked online. The next morning we went on a city tour. Then they had lunch in an Indian restaurant. Afterwards we went to Disneyland, in what I saw Snow White, Mickey, Donald Duck and many other characters. And I was lucky enough to taking photographs with all of them. We played with water or watched a Mickey Mouse 3D show as well. In the evening we watched a wonderfully fireworks show near one of the castle there.
On a word, I will never forget this trip in my life.
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Dear Lucy,
I’m Li Hua,How are you going these days? As you know, there are various destination of cultural heritage in China. Yet the one I like better for visiting is Mogao Caves. The reasons for my choice is as follows.
Mogao Caves are located at a key point along the Silk Route, that is the crossroads of trade as well religious, cultural and intellectual influences. Mogao are distinguishing for their statues and wall paintings, spanned 1,000 years of Buddhist art with an unmatched historical value. It’s a appealing place that you won’t miss it. It’s really worth visiting and I’m extreme looking forward to visiting it soon.
Yours.
Li Hua
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Good morning, everyone. It is my honor to stand here and share with something about traveling. Which I’d like to convey is that to travel is also to learn. Take my journey to Xi’an for example. Previous, I did learn something about the city from books and TV programs. Therefore, I didn’t know what wonderful it was until I was there in person. When traveling, we can feel the surrounding with our own eyes, noses and so on, thus broaden our horizons. The picture taken on the Great Wall is good reminder of my happy days when I stay in Xi’an. So everyone, seize every chance or you will start an amazing journey to learn.
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We had a school trip on last Sunday. Hundreds of us students took part in it excited.
At 8:00 a.m., we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries. When someone fall behind, others would come or offer help. About two hours later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did we get close to nature, but also we relaxed myself. What wonderful time!