Dear Sally,
I am extreme pleased that you are visiting Xi’an this summer vacation. I’d like to express your warm welcome and offer you a few suggestion. Xi’an had a long history and 13 dynasties, included Western Zhou, Qin, Western Han, Sui and Tang, made Xi’an their capital. There are plenty of places of interest in Xi’an, among where the Terracotta Army is the most attractive. Besides, visiting the Big Wild Goose Pagoda and Shaanxi History Museum are the best choice. If you are hiking lover, you can climb the Cuihua Mountain, on top of which you can get a wonder view of our city. By the way, you had better to taste famous Xi’an snacks.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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With the Spring Festival come, there will be a long winter holiday. However, I am not going to travel somewhere, because I don’t want to join the crowds. Instead of, I just want to stay at home and enjoyed the family time. I am so delightedly that my grandparents will come to stay with us for few days. So my parents decide to having a family hotpot and invite some relatives together. It is so a great reunion that everyone will have much fun. What’s more, we will drive to our hometown, what is near the city center. There will be fewer people and we can appreciate the beauty of natures.
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注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限-词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Travelling is good activity. When you’re tiring from your work or studies and when you’re freely, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoying the beauty of nature. You can breathe fresh air and made new friends.
But sometimes, travelling will cause some problem. The weather change quickly. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while travelling.
Therefore, you should prepare myself carefully before a trip. You should listen to the weather forecast but prepare for the bad weather. You’d better to find a companion so that you can help each other and may avoid accidents.
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I’m sorry to say that I can’t go to Wuzhen with you as planning. I’m writing to apologize for breaking my promise. I had been expecting to visit Wuzhen with you, where we can get close to the nature and experience local customs. However, I can’t travel recent because I hurt my leg in an accident. That is because I think it is a good choice for us to put away our travel. I will appreciate if you could allow me to fix another date. If it’s convenience for you, shall we travel there during the summer vacations? If not, please keep me informed of what time suited you best in advance.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
You cannot imagined how excited we were, when we had such a precious chance to do some picking on local farm. We have expected it for a long time. The farm, which is about one hour’s drive from our school, cover an area of 6 times the size of our school. We devoted the first 2 hours to collecting tomatoes as well as eggplants but spent another 2 hours gather strawberries. And at dinnertime, the food materials gathered by us became a wonderful meal, much to us surprise. This activity not only enriches our knowledges, but also lets us to get so close to nature. I look forward to enjoying more interested activities in the future.
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注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend. I had been looking forward to go there for a long time. It is one of the modern city in the world. There are also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can’t learn it in school. I’d also like to seeing the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. Unfortunately, the Twin Towers were destroyed on September 11th, 2001 and I would have the chance to see them by themselves. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I bet it will be a unforgettable experience.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our class visited the City Folk Museum last week. To begin, we searched for as more information as possible on the Internet. Feeling excitedly, we gathered at the entrance on Friday morning. Then a guide was showed us the exhibition of paper cuts designing for different uses. After that, we watched a digital film, what made us know our folk culture better. Finally, we go to the do-it-yourself area. We learned to make some paper cuts or painted a couple of fantastic mask there. We all felt it was a unforgettable experience and the museum was certainly worth a visit.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
You asked many question in your last letter, and now let me answer them. To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history. You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope we will enjoy it. Besides, there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City. These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
