增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43. 3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What was worse, 82. 8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, whom care for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practical advice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.
In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.
I enjoy learning English but can remember individual words easy. However, when it comes to reading comprehension, it’s really the challenge. Last weekend, I tried to read a storybook write in English to improve my reading. At first, I refer to the dictionary every time I came across a new word, which I found it not very helpful. I often felt puzzling about what I had read. Then I tried to finish a chapter completely with looking up the new words. What surprised me was I could understand the story merely from the context. I hope I will make great progresses in English in this way.
My grandmother had been suffering from Alzheimer’s so she lived alone for a long time. She’d moved out with our family when we realized it wasn’t safely for her to live alone. Even if she forgot the names of her grandchildren which she saw daily for almost three years ago, she never forgot about his friend Margaret. She was always eager to share these memory with anyone who would listen. When she seemed a little down, I would encourage her, “Telling me about your best friend Margaret.” She would smile. “We used to get into all sorts difficulties. Did I ever tell you about our double date?” “Why didn’t you tell me now?”
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Among the things what have happened to me, there is one that I will never forget.
One Saturday, I invited Eric my house. Unfortunate, I was bitten by my dog. Then the wound started to bleed. After apply pressure to the area with a clean bandage, Eric cleaned my wound with soap and water under running water for at least 5 minute. Therefore, the wound didn’t stop bleeding after 10 minutes of direct pressure. At that urgent moment, he send me to the nearest hospital for further treatment. The doctor thought highly of my action.
I was so grateful to him. And from this unforgettable experience, I realized the important of first aid. So, to help myself out and save others, I have learned some knowledge about first aid after that.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Popularity is the state of being liked, enjoyed or supported by others. Natural, we all desire to win popularity in one way or another. To enjoy popularity, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take active part in all our class activities. We should be responsible for the work and keep team spirit on mind.
To be a popular student, we must show our respect, concern and sympathy for other. As a result, we never hesitated to lend a hand to those in need. We ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do it at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development, be good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services and so on. In time of success we remain modest, when in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded.
All in all, being a popular student among the classmates and teachers come to those who can overcome their shortcomings but keep improving their personal qualities.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Beijing 2022 Winter Paralympics was held from March 4 to 13. The Paralympics featured more than 600 athletes from around the world competed in 78 events from six sports. The Paralympics took place in three competition zone—downtown Beijing, the capital northwest Yanqing district and co-host city Zhangjiakou in Hebei province.
The athletes who took part in the Beijing 2022 Winter Paralympics were inspiration to the world with their courage and determination. They take to the ice and snow, and showcasing their extraordinary abilities and skills, challenging themselves and even breaking world records. Their exciting performances in the sporting events demonstrated its physical, mental and emotional strengths. Additional, they overcame the odds through supporting each other, showing the close bonds and connections of humanity. Can you think of some moments when highlight these amazing athletes?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每句不超过两个错误;2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10出,多者(从第11处起)不计分
The relationship between teachers and students has been hotly discussing in recent years, for more and more attention is paid education. Here are some tips on how to get along well with teachers from students' perspective.
First and foremost, make a good first impression on your teachers. With the saying goes, well begun is half done. A good first impression is important for teacher to remember your name among your fellow students. Secondly, study hardly and be active in class. A student who loves studying and cooperate with teachers in class can definite impress teachers deeply. Finally, communicate with your teachers often after class can help you make good friends with them.
To conclude, teacher-student relationship is never complex if we could have excellent academic performance, be cooperative in a class or make friends with your teachers.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Over 27 million Chinese watch the first online concert of Irish band Westlife at Friday night. Hold in London and livestreamed on WeChat, the concert impressed Chinese fans deep with many hit songs, as well as a Chinese song. Besides the good pronunciation in a Chinese song, the band’s interactions also thrilled the audience. For many Chinese, their most favourite English songs were by Westlife. The band left a mark on them during their youth, but the concert allowed them to share their memories with peer across the globe. This was just WeChat’s first move invite more global celebrities, said Zhu Liqun, which leads the marketing department.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
On a bright November day, a graceful English lady walk into a cozy bookshop in the heart of London’s Chinatown. She picked up a orderly pile of New Year cards and calendars decorating with beautiful Chinese paper cutting patterns and Chinese ink paintings. Then she warm greeted the shop assistant. The lady was 91-year-old Pamela Youde whose husband was the late Sir Edward Youde, which served as the governor of Hong Kong between 1982 and in 1986. For several decade, Youde has been a loyal customer of Guanghwa Bookshop. Every winter, apart from buy New Year cards from Guanghwa for her friends and family, he also buys Chinese calendars for each of her four grandchildren. She expects help them learn Mandarin well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
1. Recently I’ve read 4 books, of that two were written by him.
2. Guangzhou, locating on the east coast of China, is known as a sea port.
3. The biggest dolphins can measure four meters length.
4. Tom, as well as his parents, like hiking very much.
5. Everything your parents have done is good to you.
6. My clothes are all wet. I’ve been worked in the rain all day.
7. She had been addicted to surf the Internet since she was a child.
8. What a great progress you have made in your English.
9. Thanks Jim’s tireless efforts, people can enjoy the city center streets without cars.
10. Mr. Smith has tried to get his point cross to all the guests present.