增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Friday, a man stops at a flower shop to order some flowers to be wired to his mother who lived two hundreds miles away. As he got out his car, he noticed a little girl sobbing there. When ask why, she said, “I want to buy a rose for my mother, and I have no money.” The man bought a beautifully rose for the girl. As they were leaving, she offered the girl a ride home. But the girl directed him to a cemetery, when she placed the rose on a freshly dug grave (坟墓). The man returned to a flower shop, canceled the wire order, picked up a bouquet and driving to his mother’s house.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Li Hua and Wang Hai are students of Senior Three. They all work hard but have different learning methods. Li Hua listens to her teachers attentive and tries to catch everything the teachers say. She spends more time doing her homework. It is certain what she can go to bed earlier and always keeps energetic in the day
However, Wang Hai had a different way of learning. He likes to stay up late at the night, so he often feels sleepy in class. Thus, he misses lots of key point and it usually spends him more time to finish his homework, that makes it difficult for him to concentrate what he is doing. I prefer Li Hua’s learning method.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When the earthquake happen in 2008, my aunt was still a little girl in a small village of Sichuan. Today, she can well remember doctors and nurses which spent days and nights saving the injure. It was then that she made up his mind to be someone like them. Her dream came true after she graduated from local medical school.
On January 2020, bad news came that Hubei was badly in need of medical worker to fight COVID-19. Immediately, she applied to go there as a volunteer but her application was accepted. When she was left, she told us she was gratefully for what people did after the earthquake and that she decided to pay it forward.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Traffic congestion have become a great concern for the people in cities. Some major roads are regularly chocked with traffic in rush hour. Getting stuck in the traffic jam is common, where sometimes makes people unable to keep calmly. To make traffic flow smoothly, the following solutions may work.
To begin with, people should take buses and ride bikes instead driving cars. In addition, the government should have more money investing in improving public transportation, so as to make it convenient for people to get around. Most importantly, people’s aware of obeying the traffic rules should be raised.
Hopeful, the effective combination of these solutions will be enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I first learned to write with English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything which I met into my own language while I was reading. My teacher advised me to keep a diary. I followed her advices and put down 100 words or so every day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself in simple English. One day I wrote an interested story and showed it my teacher. She liked it so very much that she read it to the class. I panic and felt nervous at first. However, all my classmates said that the story sounded wonderful. Their words were a great encouragement to me. How a pleasant experience it was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, everybody. I'm honored to share Dr. Huang Guoping’s inspired story with you.
Dr. Huang born in a remote village. Before his nine-year compulsory education, he attended Yilong Middle School in 2004 and repeat senior year at Nanshan Middle School in2007.It was in 2008 when he was admitted to Southwest University. After postgraduate he entered into the Chinese Academy of Science and studied for his doctorate for 5 years. When she was young, his mother left home and his father died. However hardly his past life was, he never gave up. Now he is working for AI Lab of Tencent with his motto “Keep learn, and then you can head for a wider world.”
Thank for your listening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, I have been moved into a new flat. The neighbourhood is so attractive which I can’t hide my love for it. Many trees and flowers are planting in the garden where I can have rest after a day of tiring work. Several shops and restaurant have been set up here. It is said that a park will be built but a new school is in plan. Besides, people who lives here are friendly and enthusiastic. What makes me most exciting is that a subway nearby is under construction. With the beautiful environment and convenient transportation, I’m sure your future here will be much good than before.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays many children show no appreciation for that their parents have done. I really feel disappointing with them. Their parents give birth to us, bring us up or shape us into intelligent ones. So we should be grateful them. One of my parents’ dearest wishes are that I can be excellent in my study. So I made the most of my precious time to study hard. When at the home, I always do as many housework as possible. Dear friend, don’t wait to be loved.
9 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now I want to tell you something what happened last weekend. On my way to the cinema, I noticed a foreigner talk to a policemen who seemed able to understand what the foreigner was saying. They two looked very worriedly. So I went up to see what I could do help them. I told the policeman the foreigner had lost his wallet or camera. Finally the foreigner got back his belonging with the help of the policeman. All of them thanked me. By the time I arrived at the cinema, the film have been over. Although I’d missed the film, but I was very happy because I had helped others with my efforts.
When the accident was happened, I was standing near a bus stop. There I saw an old lady waiting a bus with her umbrella. The bus soon arrived. There were too many passengers hurried to get on it that the old lady couldn’t get on. A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away. Unluckily, the old lady’s umbrella was caught by the door. He shouted to the driver but he didn’t hear. The bus pulled her along the road. Finally, she fall to the ground. Several minutes late, the ambulance came and took her to hospital. I thought it was the driver should be responsible for the accident.
