增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year, with Christmas approached, my sisters and I felt quite thrilled. However, one day after Christmas, my father gathered us together. He told us he can’t afford any presents, even our traditional treat. As the oldest child, I felt upset and understandable. My mother had a serious disease, who cost my family much money to constant seek a cure. On the Christmas Eve, we heard a knock on the door. Unexpectedly, two our neighbors came in with some gifts. It kept we entertained. I will never forget the two kind neighbors who have always been inspiring me to share anything with those in need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m sorry to say that I can’t go to Wuzhen with you as planning. I’m writing to apologize for breaking my promise. I had been expecting to visit Wuzhen with you, where we can get close to the nature and experience local customs. However, I can’t travel recent because I hurt my leg in an accident. That is because I think it is a good choice for us to put away our travel. I would appreciate if you could allow me to fix another date. If it’s convenience for you, shall we travel there in our summer vacations this year? If not, please keep me informed of what time suited you best in advance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Today, my family and I went hiking in the mountain where is rich in wildlife. We had a great time explored the beautiful scenery. We set out early in the morning, full equipped with snacks and water. During the climb, we watch the wildlife and took many photo. Besides, we have had a picnic lunch at the top of the mountain and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings.
Personally, I felt a great sense of satisfaction after succeeding reaching the top. Though tiring, I considered them worth my time. Spending time with family in nature brought us much close to each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
The proverbs I like most is “Where there is a will, there is a way”, what tells that we should stick to our dreams. When in Junior Middle School, I was too poor in my studies that I nearly gave up. And my head-teacher was always there. He gives me confidence every time I lost my heart. He encouraged me with the proverb continuous. Thanks to my teacher, all my efforts paying off and finally I became a top student. Nothing is impossible to a will heart. As long as you keep trying, you’ll make.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many students like doing interested chemical experiments. And the excitement of doing our first lab experiment ended up be quite scary for me. Earlier this month, they did a chemical experiment and used an alcohol burner in this experiment. At beginning of the class, our teacher told us to be careful, but we were such excited that we didn’t care about what he said. Before my partner and I were working, we heard the girl sitting in front of us suddenly shout “Fire! Fire!” I saw a fire to spread across her table, and we felt really terrible. Our teacher quick ran over and put it out by a piece of cloth at last.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I remember my school days being cheerful and fun while learning many lessons about life. Even though I was able to acquire knowledge from textbooks, the lesson of friendship, teamwork, hard work and discipline I learnt outside the classroom remained closely to my heart.
My school days would not be completed without my friends in school. Each year, I got new friends and teachers with who I shared my dreams, doubts or worries. Along with play silly jokes on others, we used to go to the school canteen and got what we liked to eat. We also shared our lunch boxes and complimented the food that made by our mothers. My school days were filled such happy memories, and I am grateful to my school for shaping us as a good student.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a little kid, I dreamed of keeping on a dog. My parents disagreed, saying that I was too young that I couldn’t take care of myself, let alone a dog. I didn’t give up. Instead, I tried to be independence and often helped with housework. A few month later, my parents found that I had become considerate than before. They finally approve of my request. On my eight birthday, they bought me a lovely dog as the gift. Followed my parents’ directions, I’ve learned how to raise the dog. I still miss those days that we accompanied each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, we took a family trip to the lively town. After they arrived, my family wandered around in the town. I, therefore, was in no mood to appreciate of the beautiful view. I was too busy worrying about my schoolwork that I failed to please myself. Walked aimlessly, I was attracted by a sleeping cat as it lies on the side of the road. How relaxed it looked! The dusty road seemed just as comfortable as a soft bed to it. Then it hit me I was supposed to relax and simple enjoy life just like that cat. We should value every precious moments when we can freely laugh and play.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Languages had fascinated me since I was young and have had a hugely impact on my life. After study several languages at university, I started travelling to a variety of country to learn languages. Not only I gain knowledge and a fun through this experience, but I also met my future wife. Culture is something what can be shared among all the different people of mankind. Let’s take this year’s Mid-Autumn Festivals as an example: On our campus, we can see people from different cultural backgrounds, dressing up in their own costumes such like hanfu, hanbok (韩服) and also kimonos (和服). They both have their own characteristics.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr Wesley,
How is everything going? I am writing to ask if or not you can do me a favor.
Having heard that our school will hold an English speech contest which theme is “my dream”, which many a student want to take part in, I also have strong desire to participate. I am firmly convinced that not only can I improve my speaking English, but also I can become more confident. However, I have no idea what should serve for the content of my speech. Therefore, I also feel puzzled about how to express me fluently and vividly in English. Could you be such kind as to give me some useful suggestions?
I will feel very much grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
