1 . During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond, which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
2 . When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the past ten years, I suffered from terrible headaches. And it seems to be getting bad. Late last night, I got a sudden headache that was worse than all the others. It was so terrible that I could hardly bear them. Although I took all kinds of painkillers, but I didn’t feel any better. It seemed that there was nothing else I could do, because I called my doctor and asked him to come over. One of our neighbor happened to be with us at the time. He was not a doctor, but he offered his help, “Do you mind if I try a special kind of traditional Chinese treatment for you? These needles might help with your headache.” I agree. He quickly took out a few needles from his bag. Without the moment’s delay, he put a few needles into the skin on my head in several different places. Before long, I felt complete good.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm writing to tell you our plan to visit to Mount Huangshan. I'd be very happy to accompany you to go here.
Mount Huangshan, locating in southern Anhui Province, famous for its fantastic scenery. Mount Huangshan has more famous scenic attractions than many another mountains in China. It is especial well known for the beautifully-shaped pine tree, clouds and rocks. The hot springs, that come out from deep underground, are suitable to bathe in and even to drink.
As it was often cloudy and rainy on the mountain, it would be better to bring a raincoat and wear the suitable pair of shoes. Let's meet at 7：40 at the school gate this Saturday morning. Looking forward to seeing you.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线．并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Zhang is one of my favorite high school teacher. He is a very patient teacher, who often explains us everything carefully to make him understood. He's also such kind and friendly that we always turn to him for help. Deal with students can be annoying sometimes, but he never complained. Besides, he always explores new ways to make his lessons attractively. Above all, Mr. Zhang is constantly encouraged us to get involved in classroom activities. He makes me to realize teaching is a very meaningful profession. That's because I'm determined to be a teacher like him in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号( ), 并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误;2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dear classmates, it’s our honor to introduce the Imperial Palace, a Chinese cultural heritage what enjoys a high reputation in the world. The magnificent and well-preserved architecture, also known for the Forbidden City, represent the highest architectural level in ancient China. With a history of about 600 years, it was lies in the center of Beijing, see great changes of this city. Nowadays, it has become a must-see scenic spots that attracts an enormously number of visitors every year.
If we have a chance visit the Imperial Palace one day, please keep in mind that in any case should we leave any marks on the cultural relics.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
The other day my parents and I took trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As is known, it’s a famous mountain with different kind of plants and animals. The weather was fine and we were on high spirits. It was about noon while we arrived at the foot of the mountain. We were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we feed monkeys, visited temples and told stories. On the way up, I was busy took photos since the scenery was beautiful and attractively. Time passed quickly, and before we knew it, night has fallen. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep the moment my head touched at the pillow.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I was glad to participate in an activity, which theme is Chinese weaving art, making me to have a taste of traditional Chinese culture deeply.
This activity held in my school library where I appreciated numerous art works, ranging from chairs to decoration. In addition, I was lucky enough to get a opportunity to learn what to weave Chinese knotting on the spot. During that time I was very enjoyable that I fell in love with the magical work immediate.
As far as I am concerned, not only do such activity make me further feel the beauty of the weaving art, but also it is beneficial to arise people’s aware of carrying forward traditional Chinese culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The meaning of life differ from person to person, but we have different life purposes in each stage of life. For each goal, the important thing is to give you encouragement to get up in the morning and fight against what we want. We had seen people who handle many tough situation with motivation. Although we share same biological structures, which sets us apart from these people is determination. Being determined to achieve something and overcame all difficulties will help us find our purposes in each stage of life. Actually, if we can not find a purpose, we’ll not only bear our suffering, but also see it as a blessing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is generally believed there is a good supply of fresh water. And to our disappointment, the fact was just the opposite.What we know, the world population is growing rapid day by day. So much fresh water is needed to feed so a big population. What's the more, with the development of industry, some factories produce poisonous waste, which consequently results from the pollution of water. It’s high time for we to take quick action to protect water resources. Stopping pollution and save water, otherwise we cannot survive on the earth.
