增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I was glad to participate in an activity, which theme is Chinese weaving art, making me to have a taste of traditional Chinese culture deeply.
This activity held in my school library where I appreciated numerous art works, ranging from chairs to decoration. In addition, I was lucky enough to get a opportunity to learn what to weave Chinese knotting on the spot. During that time I was very enjoyable that I fell in love with the magical work immediate.
As far as I am concerned, not only do such activity make me further feel the beauty of the weaving art, but also it is beneficial to arise people’s aware of carrying forward traditional Chinese culture.
Before the holiday, I thought about doing something meaningfully. Suddenly, I remembered that there was a lot of primary school students putting up small shops and sell red bags on the street last Spring Festival. Wanting to have a try, so I begged my father to support him. He bought some lovely red bags and small toy. For the first time in my life I begin to sell things at the gate of the park. This experience of selling taught me the secret of communicating strangers, and I understood what hard it is for my parents to make money.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago I studied in Spain and stay with a host family. I was in a city calling Alcola de Hemades outside Madrid. It's a 30-minutes train ride from downtown Madrid, that I experienced every Monday to Friday. Because of I attended a Spanish International school, I went to class with Brazilians, French, Germans and so on. It was really well for my Spanish as I was able practise with my friends who couldn't speak English. As the result, my Spanish improved greatly soon. Besides, my host family was really wonder. With their help, I enjoyed mine stay in Spain.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
1. If he will be invited to the meeting is not known.
2. The professor in the end decided to give the prize to who he believed had a good command of English.
3. Indeed, body positions are part of that we call “body language”.
4. It remains to be seen if or not this idea can be put into practice.
5. She’s not the brilliant dancer that she used to.
6. One reason why Hamlet is such a successful play is because it appeals to many different people.
7. He is that you call a “walking dictionary”; he knows almost every word.
8. The news which he intended to come gave us much pleasure.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are many people who wants to protect the environment but don’t know that should be done. Here are a few tips that can help you lighten the burden on the heavily polluting earth.
Don’t leave any electrical appliance (电器) on careless if you are not using it. It can contributed to saving energy. In addition, recycle cans, bottles, plastic bags and newspapers if circumstances allow us to. Finally and the most importantly, be an educator. Talk with both your family and friends about global warming or let them be aware the importance of protecting the environment. Please remember that everyone contribution counts when it comes to creating a greener world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw different robot. It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people, included playing chess, playing the piano and drawing pictures. What’s more, the robots were in different types and shapes, which made us enjoyable. In addition, that excited me most is the show given by a group of robots. They danced just like dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot of about robots, especial about their functions and shapes. The great human wisdom is very powerful that it makes us feel more comfortable live in the world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A few days ago, my grandfather moved in to live with us. At first, I was full of idea about what it was going to like. We would take him to the senior center for lunch and he would make friends with there. However, Granddaddy Bill refuses to even go outside, much more to the senior center. He was simply exciting to just have somebody to talk to and watch television with. Then I realized being a good caregiver meant dropping my own judgments about that it should be, and focus instead on his needs. Once I understood what was real important to him, he was able to spend his last years living the life he wanted, in a way he wanted.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the Spring Festival, my classmates and I visited the Nursing Home in our city. The elderly people here expressed their warm welcome for us arrival. We brought them some fruits and flower. Then we set out to cleaning the windows, sweep the floors, wash their clothes and so on. We all worked very hardly. After that, we sat down, chat with them happily. They told to us many old interesting stories and we share some recent hot topics with them. Three hours had passed since we knew it. At end of our trip, they said we had made their day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Lily,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China this summer vacation! Knowing that you’re amazing at traditional China, I’d like to recommend my most favourite city, Suzhou to you.
Suzhou, referring as the Venice of the East, is an attractively city located in the southeast of Jiangsu Province. It had been listed by UNESCO as a world cultural heritage. The Classical Gardens are the symbol of the city, there you can have better understanding of China. Because these gardens are not large, they’re unique to their designs. It bring together the beauty of nature, architecture and painting.
I believe you will enjoy your time in Suzhou.
Yours,
Lihua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Candy,
I’m sorry to hear you’re not feeling well and I’d give you some tip.
First,you shouldn’t stay up later to study every night, since it is great importance to get enough sleep. Indeed you are busy learning that teachers have taught you, so you still need to keep a balance between leisure and studies. If you had to stay up, I would suggest you ate more vegetables and fruits. Have a talk with your family or friends might be useful when we really have difficulty solving problems. I’m sure they will provide you with necessarily and timely help.
I hope you’ll take a good care of yourself and be in a good mood.
Yours,
Li Hua