增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When the earthquake happen in 2008, my aunt was still a little girl in a small village of Sichuan. Today, she can well remember doctors and nurses which spent days and nights save the injured. It was then that she made up his mind to be someone like them. Her dream came true after she graduated from local medical school.
On January 2020, bad news came that Hubei was badly in need of medical worker to fight COVID-19. Immediately, she applied to go there as a volunteer but her application was accepted. When she was left, she told us she was gratefully for what people did after the earthquake and that she decided to pay it forward.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is well-known to all is that nothing is more important than health. People with good health can do their work good and enjoy their life. On the contrary, being unhealthy, people may lose many chances.
There are many ways to keep healthy. To begin with, people should have enough sleep to rest and refresh them. Besides, having a balanced diet is great benefit to physical health. Obviously, it is necessary to eat fruit and vegetables contains various vitamins. However, what people should do most is participating in more outdoor activity regularly to build up their body. They shouldn't sat in front of TV or computers for a long time, that is harmful to our health.
In a conclusion, health is wealth. As for students, only when we are healthy can we keep on studying and live a happy life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处)不计分。
At a Friday night, a poor young artist stood at the entrance of the subway station and played his violin with large piece of paper on the ground. Before long, he was surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said, “Last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please come to claim it soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could be. After about half an hour, a man named George came and brought back his lottery what won a prize of ¥ 500 ,000. Later someone asked the violinist, “Why didn’t you keeping the lottery ticket for yourself?” He said, “While I don’t have much more money, I live happily. However, if I lose honest, I won’t be happy forever.”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the train, I heard a young man in her twenties sitting by the window sudden shouted, “Dad, look! The trees are going behind!” His father just smiled. I looked the big boy’s childish behavior with pity. A boy shouted again, “Dad, look! The clouds were running with us!” I couldn’t help say to his father, “Why don’t you take your son to see to a doctor?” The father said, “I did that. He has just come out from the hospital. My son was blind from births. He just can see things with his eyes today.” At that time, a woman said to me, “Young man, don’t judge people after you truly know them. The truth may surprised you.”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was at middle school, I had a nice classmate, who were the first foreigner I had ever met. Although she was born in China, she was good in three languages. It was interested that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She enjoys listening to pop music, collecting stamps, as well as playing piano. Because her dream was to be an engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told some funny story in English to make us laughing. We all liked her.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, over seventy percent of our planet are covered by sea, where is rich in salt as well as fish. What’s more, there is a great deal of oil or gas under the sea. In other words, the sea is the place with so many important things we live in. However, with the world population increased rapidly, overfishing has become a serious problem. Every day a lot of rubbishes and waste water are poured into the sea, so the sea is bad polluted. As the result, the number of fish has obviously decreased. Besides, some are dying out or have been died out.
Therefore, it is time for everybody protect the sea.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack,
I’m more than pleasing to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute may be a good choice, which are intended for the Chinese learners whom are not native.
Confucius Institute provided various interesting subjects. You can learn from Chinese history as good as Chinese writing. Besides, teachers will introduce any traditional Chinese festivals, such as the Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival. Some relevant activity will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings and eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have good knowledge of Chinese life.
I hope you will find my recommendation helpfully.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限—词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
A terrible fire happened in one office building in our city at about nine o'clock last night.
In the beginning, we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the five floor, and we also hear the explosion of the gas tank. It was said what the fire started at the first floor, spreading one by one to the floors above, but finally reached the top floor. Some windows and brick wall were burnt down because the heat of the fire. Many people stood outside on the streets watch the fire in horror. Many bravely firemen and fire engines came quickly. Luckily, there was no one person in the office building when the fire was broke out. It took about two hours for the firemen to put out a big fire.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am one of your customer. I ordered a pair of shoes for my mum as a gift on Women's Day. To my disappoint, there are the followed problems.
To begin with, it didn't arrive on schedule, which misses Women's Day. Besides, not only it the wrong size but it is also of wrong colour. That bothers me most is the quality of the shoes. They are not made of genuine leather, and give off bad smell. I'm so annoyed to have received such poor service that I hope you give a due attention to the matter. I'd like you to either return my money and deliver a new pair to me.
It would be high appreciated if I could handle the matter at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua