Dear Sally,
I am extreme pleased that you are visiting Xi’an this summer vacation. I’d like to express your warm welcome and offer you a few suggestion. Xi’an had a long history and 13 dynasties, included Western Zhou, Qin, Western Han, Sui and Tang, made Xi’an their capital. There are plenty of places of interest in Xi’an, among where the Terracotta Army is the most attractive. Besides, visiting the Big Wild Goose Pagoda and Shaanxi History Museum are the best choice. If you are hiking lover, you can climb the Cuihua Mountain, on top of which you can get a wonder view of our city. By the way, you had better to taste famous Xi’an snacks.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
Many students are unwilling to do housework at home, say that they are too busy studying. However, in my opinion, students should spent some time helping with housework. Here are some reason. If we left all the housework to our parents, it will make them very much tired. For our part, being independent is really benefit. As a matter fact, the earlier we learn to be independent, the better our future will be. Doing housework can help us to learn to look after us. Now we are no long small children, but we ought to help with housework to reduce our parents’ burdens.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to receive your letter ask me how to learn ancient Chinese poems. Since you are such interested in poems, I’d like to share my opinions for you. First of all, if I am you, I would read them repeated. This can help you well understand that the poets want to convey. As the old Chinese saying which goes, “Read a hundred times, and the meaning will appear.” Besides, you should know some background informations about them, such as the author and the historical period. Finally, I suggest you should recite some poems, which can make you enjoy the beautiful rhymes and beats of it. I am always willing offer help if you have any questions.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ladies and gentleman, Thank you for coming today to attend the graduation ceremony at No. 3 Senior High School. Firstly of all, I’d like to congratulate all the students who are here today. I remember meet all of you when you were just started Grade 7 at this school. You were all so full of energy and thirst for knowledge. And yes, some of you were a little difficult to deal !But today I see a room full of talented young adults who is full of hope in the future. I hope you'll remember the important people in your lives who helped and support you — your parents, your teachers, your classmate and your friends. Please consider how they’ve done for you and what they mean for you. Lastly, the end of junior high school is the beginning of a new life. You’ll make mistake along the way, but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up. But along with difficulties, there will also be many excited things wait for you. Behind each door you open is chances to learning new things, and you have the ability to make your own choices. Choose wise and be responsible for your decisions and actions. Although you have to go your separate ways now, but I hope that in a few years’ time, you’ll come back to visit our school.
As you set out on our new journey, you shouldn’t forget where you came from. The future is your. Good luck and hope to see you again sometimes soon!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Over 27 million Chinese watch the first online concert of Irish band Westlife at Friday night. Hold in London and livestreamed on WeChat, the concert impressed Chinese fans deep with many hit songs, as well as a Chinese song. Besides the good pronunciation in a Chinese song, the band’s interactions also thrilled the audience. For many Chinese, their most favourite English songs were by Westlife. The band left a mark on them during their youth, but the concert allowed them to share their memories with peer across the globe. This was just WeChat’s first move invite more global celebrities, said Zhu Liqun, which leads the marketing department.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago, I was addicted for computer games. I played with games day and night on weekends. I lost interesting in my studies and I was often absent from school.
My parents got very worrying about me. They persuaded me to quit play games, but I wouldn’t give up my bad habit. Later my English teacher gave me some advices on how to quit the bad Habit. Listing the disadvantages of playing computer games on a piece of paper, I put them on my bed and tried to remember them. Beside the list were my effective schedule. I followed my schedule strictly and managed to get rid playing games. After that I became active in studying and turn out to be one of the top students in our school.
