| A．Korea. | B．Canada. | C．China. |
1. 表示歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 弥补措施。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a six-year-old Canadian schoolboy, Ryan was determine to do something to help the children who couldn’t get enough clean water in developing African country. At first, his plan was to earn money to build the single well somewhere in Africa. He cleaned windows and did gardening for his family and neighbors. He soon reached his first target of $70, and when he gave the money to a charity, he was told that it actually cost $2,000 to build a well. Seventy dollars was only enough for a hand pump. Ryan understands that a hand pump wouldn’t help the children. He started to ask help from his classmates and neighbors and persuaded them to donate money. At the same time, a friend of Ryan’s mother helped make his story to go public. After several months, Ryan raised the $2, 000, with what a well was built near a primary school in Uganda. The children at the school no longer needed to walk for hours to get water. Late, Ryan’s experience led him to set up a foundation to encourage more people to help. Many inspiring people gave him their support.
