1 . 文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A month ago, my parent asked me what present I want for my birthday. After think for a moment, I told them that I wanted to raise a dog. I thought they would probable say ”No” because they did it all the time, so this time they said “Yes”. I was so surprising. My parents bought a puppy for me and they believed that I could took care of her. I was so happy that she had a dog to play with. Every time I get to home, she will run to me and show her excitement. What lovely dog! I treat her as my close friend.