1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修以你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How many time do you spend with your parents? Your parents are your dearer people in the world when you are young. And they always care for you deep. But even though many children still loves their mum and dad, families may become less close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to got together. Have you ever thought of how you can show your parents that you love them? Find a chances and do something for them or have sincere talk with them. What you can do this, your parents will be very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, one of my friends had sent me a short message, say that true friends are one soul in two bodies. It moves me very much and makes me think how true friendship is. Nowadays, the word friendship has been used very often that it has lost its meaning. Some jokingly put it that friends made to be taken advantage of. In my opinion, true friendship doesn’t mean that when you need your friends’ help, you’ll treat them for dinner. True friendship is the communication of the hearts and understand of the friends’ souls. True friends keep you in the mind, no matter where they are. Once you have found such true friends, do treasure him. With true friendship, life proves happily and harmonious.
增加: 在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
In my heart, my mom is my heroine in every way. No matter that what happens to her, she always makes sure that she is strongly enough to be able to take care of my brother and me. When we were young, my mom sets a good example to us, which let us know the importance of making decisions or being respectful. She often puts other first. She tells me that helping other people also means help herself. All of her friend will turn to her if they need help, because she is understanding and kind-hearted person. I think my mother is the best person in this world. He is always there for me when I need her. I love her very much and I hope she will be proud with me one day in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many a person amaze us in our lives. One of the more impressive for me is my cousin, who graduated from a key university majoring in Computer Science. She once said, “My dream is to become an expert at computer.” Unlucky, a serious illness resulted his disability, so he moved around with two stick. To earn his life, he set up a small computer shop years ago. Then he taught himself what to repair computers by reading e-books as well as paper books and watch teaching videos. Now my cousin has been become a famous disabled computer expert.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandparents live in the countryside or grow older and older. Several times, my parents asked them to move on to thecity to live with us. But they didn’t agree. They used to the free life of the country. They have dogs, cats, chickens, ducks, geese and another animals at home. They are busily in growing crops and vegetable. So I suggested open broadband Internet in my grandparents’ home. My dad also changed my grandparents’ phones into smartphones. After everything was done, my task was to download apps for my grandparents’ mobile phones and taught them how to chat on mobile phones. Now my all family can chat with my grandparents anytime we like.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As I was growing up, we were often for the move. During that period, I have to admit that moving so often made myself feel lonely. However, my mother did everything she could help me feel happy. In a fact, so much travelling was really a good thing because it made our bond high developed. I respect my mother so much as she never treats me as a child, but as an equal. She gives me the freedom to make mistake and to learn from them all. Unlike friendships that can fade or break, I know I’ll always be connecting with my mother no matter how I face. She is not just a role model for me, and someone I love deeply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Coming from a poor family, my brother and I have got used to have no big gifts at Christmas.Therefore, on one Christmas day, when saw Dad return with something wrapped in a large box, we were extreme surprised. We were curious about that was inside. Dad told us that he had prepared of something for us. Opening a box, we saw there were two guitars. Although Dad goes through a hard time in money, he bought us such wonder gifts. He said he always felt happy give us some surprise. The guitars always remind us of the love from Dad and we have been keeping it till today.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
This morning, I was surfing the Internet in my bedroom to look for some informations for my study. Sudden my mother turned up and shouted at me, thought that I was playing computer games. I was very angry and argue with her. After that, my father criticized me with my rude behavior. My mother was really hurt but he still tried to forgive me. Now, I feel rather regret. My parents are so concerned about me, but I hurt to them. I think I should respect my parents whenever happens instead of just thinking of myself and losing my temper all time.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Last Saturday, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. Though there was a large number of people in the crowded train, everyone help those who had lots of baggage and behaved politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one hill after another. Then what came into our eye were fields with green crops. Before a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents’ house. Exhausted as I felt, but I was happy to see my grandparents, which I hadn’t seen for a long time. It’s really an excited trip because it was the first time I had taken so a long-distance train.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
Dear Jack,
I am terrible sorry that I won’t be able to go to your birthday party this Saturday afternoon, so yesterday my mother didn’t feel well and I took her to the hospital. The doctor suggest that she should have a operation immediately. I have to look after her in the hospital for a few day. I sincerely hope something will go well and that you can have happy birthday party. By the way, I have sent to you the latest post of Wang Yibo as a birthday gift. I know you are a fan of him and I hope he will enjoy it.I am looking forward to see you soon.
Yours,
Sue
