增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
I have a good friend calls Tony. He is our monitor and he as well as another two classmates in our class are outstanding. Though he is a clever boy, but he works very hard and makes great progresses. Having much in common, we often have a lot to talk about. Once he told me something happened when his parents were out. He was doing his homework one Sunday morning while he smelt something burning. He stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of his neighbor’s house. He called 119 immediately. Ten minutes late, the firemen came and put off the fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for his help.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)画掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yao is one of my best freinds who I grew up with from the age of 2. However, she moved to Italy 9 year ago because of her parents’work. Last year I came back to our home town spend the summer vacation. Missed her so much , I immediately went to an airport to pick her up when I heard about her return. Upon meeting, we tightly hugged with each other. Then we started to talk about the past joy moments we shared together. She brought me a little memorial sculpture of a cartoon character or the newly updated series of the novels that we are crazy about before as gifts. What kind and considerate she was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listened to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father changed his job and they moved to another city. Since then we aren’t seen each other much, but we’ve kept being writing to each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some students have always been very efficient (效率高的) at schoolworks, among whom, Li Lin, a monitor of our class, is an example. When asking why he was always so productive, Li responded that this was some good habits that benefited him greatly and helped him to be efficient. Because he believes that efficiency depends on good organization, he has strictly following plans. Besides, he makes full use of his time. He listens attentive and takes notes in class. After class, not only he finish his homework but also he makes sure that he has reviewed that he learned timely. This is Li Lin, from him we can learn that a student’s good performance is closely connected with his better habits.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\），划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known to all, build good relationships with others is critical in our society. When it comes about personal relationships, I’d natural think of my relationship with my mother. She often told me that I can be anyone I want, as long as I’m confidence of myself. She sees my talent and pushes me to do the best I possibly can. I respect for my mother so much for she treats me as an equal instead of child. She gives me the free to make mistakes and to learn from it. Unlike friendships what can fade and break, I know I’ll always be connected with my mother whatever I face.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（N），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandmother is in her eighty this year. Last month, I bought her smart phone specially designed for the elderly. I patiently teach her how to telephone or how to have a video chat with others on WeChat. I practiced again and again. She was very thrilling when she could chat on WeChat. She thought the smart phone was such powerful a tool. Now she has final mastered how to use the smart phone. To her delight, she can have a video chat with me on WeChat without being helped. She takes pride in herself because of she can keep up with the times. She no long feels lonely.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Out of all the people I have met, my father is the most influential in my life. He has made an impact in me through both his word and his actions.
When I was very young, my father took an interest in which I did. In addition, he taught me to work hard. Once I took part in music competition, but I had to practice playing the piano for weeks and weeks. I became discouraging, but my father sits with me each evening and helped me learn my songs well. What’s more, my father has been influenced me by his example, work hard to do his best in everything.
I am thankful and I hope I can make him proud of his life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum made the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a student, my most favorite dream job is becoming a doctor. It has been my dream since my early age. My father is a doctor and he is very busy to be with me. I am not sad because what he did is highly thought by his patients. I hope to be a person like her and devote my life to help others. But what I can reach my goal soon are not easy. The only thing I can do is to study hardly and prepare myself with rich knowledges. What about your dream?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In our daily life, there is always something unforgettable what that takes place between our friends and us. I remember that, on a rainy day, in my way to school I suddenly fell down and hurt myself bad. I had to stay in hospital for about two week but I was worried about my study. Then my friend Li Hua comes to see me. Whenever he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. Heard that, I was very happy. From that day on, he taught me after school every day. I was so touching. Thanks to my help, I didn't fall behind others in my class.
