增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week our music teacher teach us a song,named Indebted Heart(感恩的心),through that now I know we should live with a thankful heart. I think of my parents, who I think are first people I should thank. It’s they who gives me life, bring me up, look after me and teach me how to live happy. I should thank my parents for giving myself so much. Maybe I should consider how to pay back to the love my parents give me. And now I think the best way to be gratefulness to my parents is to study well. And then be a useful person to the society is my ideal.
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
建议①:找人聊聊你的感受;
建议②:保持乐观积极的态度。
建议③:……
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.
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Yours,
Li Hua