增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Festivals, which has a wide range of origins, are celebrated all over the world. Of all the tradition festivals, the harvest festival can be found in almost every culture.
People celebrate to show they are grateful to the year’s supply of food. Customs play a significant role in festivals, but some traditions may fade away while others may established. In order to avoiding air pollution, many big cities have given up the custom of lighting firecrackers. With businesses taken advantage of celebrations, festivals are becoming increasing commercial. Online shopping websites and social media app have made it much easy for the public to spend more on their loved ones.
Festivals, reflecting on people’s wishes, are an important part of society.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，（多者从第11处起）不计分。
The winter holiday is approaching, which makes me exciting, I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like to go skating climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the football with my classmates. How a wonderful time I'll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think differently. They don't want me go out. They were afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck, fall off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated as a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 每句只允许修改 1 处，多者不计分。
It’s my grandmother’s seventy birthday today. As usually, my family got together to celebrate it. We bought her a lot of presents, and my father prepared for a big birthday cake. At the dinner party, they sang “Happy Birthday to You” song. She made a wish happy before she blew the candles out. I cooked a dish for her as special gift. Since I have never cooked before, she was so surprising when the dish was served. My grandmother said that it was the better birthday gift she had received. Actually, my mother helped me cooked it and I had practiced for several days.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today was Sunday, and I was so pleasing because our family had a bigger gathering. We went to the park to having a barbecue. Since the family members hadn’t got together with a long time, so my father decided to organize a family gathering. In the park, I played with cousins. We were visiting the park while our parents were doing a barbecue. When my cousins and I was tired, we went to join the grown-ups’ activities. We share our lives while eating. I like this activity so much that I hope my family can have more times together.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.
It was my 18th birthday yesterday. As the age is special for our teenagers, so my parents held a birthday party for me at home. With my parents and some of my good friends attend my birthday party, I really had unforgettable experience. We sang songs, dancing and played games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the party, my parent told me that from then on I was no longer a child and an adult. They also said I should be more independent and responsibly. Hearing their words, I was greatly encouraged. It was just in that moment when I felt I was a grown-up.
