增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to the zoo where there were a lot of child visiting elephants, monkeys and pandas. They looked very happily. I was about to leave while I found a little boy crying in the zoo. He was lost but couldn’t find his parents. I tried my best to make him to stop cry and played with him. At last, his parents come. I was proud of myself. After while, I met my friend Li Ming and we went for boating together. Both of us enjoyed myself very much. How a meaningful day!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The spring festival is the more important holiday for the Chinese people. There are many traditional activity to celebrate the festival, such as to do a thorough cleaning to having a new look for the new year, to paste handwritten couplets(对联) on front doors to bring a good luck. On some areas, people conduct Yangge dance and lion dance to increase the festival atmosphere. Also, people prepared a variety of foods treat the family, friends and relatives. The festival lasts for 15 days. It’s usually the biggest family gathering for most families, but everyone is supposing to go home to join the celebration. Train and airplane tickets are very difficulty to get before the festival.
This morning my American friends Jack and I went to the temple fair holding in our city. When we arrived at the park, we were amazed at that we saw. There were such many different performances and booths selling tradition handicrafts. Since there were lots of games to play, food to eat, and performances to see, we spend at least six hours walking through crowds of people. Jack said he had great time because he not only tasted numerous kinds of local snacks and another dishes but also enjoyed live dragon and lion danced, waist drum dancing and other folk performances. We came back of home at about seven p. m., tired and happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Festivals, which has a wide range of origins, are celebrated all over the world. Of all the tradition festivals, the harvest festival can be found in almost every culture.
People celebrate to show they are grateful to the year’s supply of food. Customs play a significant role in festivals, but some traditions may fade away while others may established. In order to avoiding air pollution, many big cities have given up the custom of lighting firecrackers. With businesses taken advantage of celebrations, festivals are becoming increasing commercial. Online shopping websites and social media app have made it much easy for the public to spend more on their loved ones.
Festivals, reflecting on people’s wishes, are an important part of society.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
It was fine but sunny last Sunday, so my parents suggested go to Dashu Mountain for a picnic. As the temperature was not too high, we decided to go there by a bike. We were chatting and laughing all the ways. At about 10:30 am, they arrived at the mountain foot. After a short rest, we began to have our lunch, that was very delicious. During the picnic, we sang and danced merry. At about 1:30 pm, we begin to climb the mountains. We saw beautiful flowers and heard birds singing sweetly. We picked a lot wild fruits, too. It was a wonderful experience. At the end of the day, we all felt tiring but really happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,(多者从第11处起)不计分。
The winter holiday is approaching, which makes me exciting, I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I'd like to go skating climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the football with my classmates. How a wonderful time I'll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think differently. They don't want me go out. They were afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck, fall off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated as a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward to relax myself. I'd like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I'll have during the holiday! However, my parents think different. They don't want me go out. They are afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate living like a bird in a cage. To getting more freedom, I will try to persuade them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As it is known to all, the Great Wall is one of the best-known place of interest around the globe. Almost everybody wants to pay a visit, but I am no exception. This summer vacation, the day I had looked forward to coming at last. I got up and set off on the early morning with my brother Tim keep me company. After two hour's bus ride, we arrived at which looked like a large market. Seeing millions of people talking, pushing and photographing, I immediate lost my enthusiasm. Indeed, the Great Wall is really something must be experienced with a little care and privacy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下而写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的同.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, my parents and I have our family holiday in Hainan. Before the trip we booked plane tickets and the hotel where we were going to live in on the Internet and got some informations about the places we were going to visit. It was very hot in Hainan that neither of us could bear the heat. Lucky for us, it rained in the evening. The next day, we went to the seaside and lay on the beach, seen the beautiful scenery. On third day, we went shopping together and buying lots of seafood for our friends. Although the trip was short, they had great fun.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The summer vacation is coming, who makes me more than exciting. I am looking forward for it. My parents first plan to travel to Britain in order to improve my English. And because of my advice, we were decided not to travel abroad. Instead, we determined to relax locally. I want join a swimming club and swim for two hours every day. On the weekends, we will go climbing with my parents and watch some of my favorite movie. Also, I can play basketball with my classmates. I believe I will have a happily and different summer vacation!