增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With popularity of the Internet, more and more people prefer to going shopping online because of its advantages. Online shopping save us a lot of valuable time. What’s more, there are a wide variety of goods for us to choose from, which may be cheaper than that in shops. Though it is convenient to go shopping online, the problems it caused can’t be ignored. Since we can’t see the actual goods on the Internet, so the quality cannot be ensured. Beside, lots of advertisements on the Internet are untrustworthy, so sometimes, the customers are easily cheating.
In my opinion, we should be carefully while we are enjoying the convenient of online shopping.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Allen,
I am so delight to know that you want to buy some gifts with Chinese characteristics. I think a Chinese brush will be a good choice.
The Chinese brush is traditional writing and drawing tool, dated back to more than 2,000 years ago. It was one of China’s Four Treasures of the Study, that is made of hairs of animals and bamboo. Writing with a Chinese brush is a little bit of hard, and it is beneficial to shape one’s mind.
In my opinions, the Chinese brush is a perfect gift for my relatives. Hope my recommendation will be helpfully. Wish you a nice journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
If you happen to be a heavy sleeper, that always wakes up about 20 minutes late for lectures, a special app calling Sleep If U Can is for you. Sleep If U Can is alarm app for students. When the alarm rings, some small task should be completed to turn the alarm on. For example, you needed to take a photo of some specifically things or shake the phone a number of times. In addition to, Sleep If U Can will also give yourself the latest weather condition. You can decide whether to take an umbrella with you before left home.
