增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
No one really know exactly when the first people arrived in what we now know as California. It is likely that Native Americans moved California at least fifteen thousands years ago. Scientists believe that these settlers were crossed the Bering Strait by a land bridge what existed in prehistoric times. In the 16th century, the native people suffered great after an arrival of the Europeans. Thousands of them were killed or forced into slavery. In addition, many died from the diseases bring by the Europeans. Therefore, some survived these terrible times, and today there are more Native Americans living in California as in any other state of America.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At 3:42 one of the greatest earthquake of the 20th century shook Tangshan. It seemed as if the world was at the end. A huge crack that was eight kilometers long and thirty meters wider cut across houses, roads and canals. Steam bursts from holes in the ground. Hard hills of rock became rivers of dirt. In fifteen terrible seconds a large city lay in ruin. The suffering of the people was extremely. Two-thirds of them died and injured during the earthquake. The number of people killing or injured reached more than 400,000. After the earthquake, everywhere the survivors looked nearly everything was destroyed. Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves and sand was now filled the wells instead of water. People were shocking and they felt hopeless.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Football starts in England 800 years ago. Players played the game with a round ball that players kicked but could not carry. There were 2 teams, all of which consisted of 200 players. However, in 1823, the student picked up the ball during a soccer game and ran with it. Teachers were shocking and angry. But the student’s schoolmate enjoyed this new game, which they named it after the school. Eventual, the game of rugby played with an oval ball that could be both carried and thrown. Rugby was exported in the United States and changed a lot, became the sport that Americans now call football.
Keep calm and carry on! You can see this message write on many T-shirt and other souvenirs in London and the UK. It has become very famous that there are many versions of it. But where does the originally phrase come from? Well, it comes from Second World War. It was the message used for a poster being created by the British government to calm people down and encourage it during the war. When London was being attacked, “Keep calm and carry on” with your life as normal, as if there were no war. Keep calm when you have problems is known as a very British thing to do. In the past British people are famous for keeping a “stiff tipper lip”. This means your lips don’t shake when you are excited or frightening: you stay calm and don’t show people how you are really. Do the British still like this today? Well, not really. However, they are still fond of this message.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the Renaissance, painters tried to paint people and nature as they real were. Rich people paid famous artists to paint pictures of them, their houses and possessions as well as their activities and achievements. One of the most important discovery during this period was how to draw things with perspective. This technique was first used by Masaccio in 1428. When people first saw his paintings, they convinced that they were looking through a hole in a wall at a real scene. If the rules of perspective have not been discovered, no one would have been able to paint such the realistic pictures. By coincidence, oil paints were also developed at this time, that made the colours used in paintings look rich and deeper. Without the new paints and the new technique, we will not be able to see the great masterpieces for which this period is famous.
A metal statue of Greek soldier was discovered in northern Xingjiang, China. Researchers explained that not doubt this was a result of Alexander the Great’s influence.
Alexander the Great was the son of a Greek king who defeated much Greek cities in battle. In the age of 20, he became king after his father died. However, many cities rose up against Alexander, so he led an army to take it back. Though his army had only 3,000 troop, but he won every battle. He took his army into the Middle East, Egypt, then India. It seemed that something could stop him from conquering the entire world. However, his own army grew tiring of endless battles and refused to go any farther. Late he came down with a fever and died in 323 BC.
Alexander the Great spread the Greek culture from Europe to Africa and Asia. The statue of the Greek soldier probable came to China in the 4th century BC with a result of trade.
假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m tiring. I’ve been digging all day and I’ll be doing same tomorrow. But I’ve never had so many fun. As an archaeology student, I have already knew something about the Qin Tomb. Most Chinese child can tell you Qin Shihuang first joined China together. He was a brilliant ruler, and he was also a cruel man. When he became king, he immediate ordered workers to construct an underground tomb, which it is said to contain great treasures. But the actual entrance to the tomb has ever been found, nor has the tomb been opened. It’s said that if everyone steps across the entrance, the crossbows will fire.
