增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school has regularly rest hours for students. However, we can often see many students do their lessons or other things before bedtime. They usually stay up until midnight.
Teenagers need enough sleep daily. Stay up late may not only do harm to their health, but also make students later for class or sleepy in class. Thus, they miss everything they should have learned.
It is blameless to stay up once in while if we do have to take up our rest time for some urgent things, so don’t make it a habit. It is advised that young people had better not stay up late, that we should bear in minds. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We really need it to make a change to the unhealthy lifestyle so as to ensure our rest time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some students think high of live-streamed lessons, which make learning more flexible, when others point to the many disadvantages such as low efficiency. As far as I am concerning, live-streamed lessons are only good for extremely self-disciplined students, but do no good to those lacked in self-control. Firstly, many students cannot stop themselves from playing their phones, which influenced their learning efficiency. Secondly, students need an environment which they are motivated to be devoted to learning, but live-streamed lessons do not provide us with such an environment. To sum up, live-streamed lessons what have a lot of disadvantages and is not fit for all.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we know, a number of the elderly living alone has increased incredible fast in recent years. Main reason include the old people’s preference for freedom, family relocation, the decline of multi-generational families and urban growth. As a consequence, some society problems have already been arisen among them such as loneliness, lack of care and survival difficulty. Therefore, it is our duty to caring about the old in terms their physical health and feelings. As young people, we should often go home and visit them besides make phone calls. In addition, we can try to keep us company no matter how old we were.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Money is vital in everyday life. Is it the people earning lots of money which are successful? In some people’s eyes, being rich is equal to be successful. They say we live a materialistic world where everything including relationships is defined by money. To be successful, that is essential to acquire a good education and it came from money. Success and money are close related to each other.
However, there are many people who have huge amounts of money, and in no case can they be said to be successful. Being successful means being satisfying with whatever things we have. Money cannot buy satisfaction or happiness, and a person who without such feeling cannot be called a success.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is quite important for parents and children to spend quality time together regular. It helps build a close and health relationship between them. On the one hand, spending time with parents give children the impression that their parents care about them. This can create a sense of security, that is particularly important for our overall development. On the other hand, it allows parents to know better about their children, include their interests and concerns. Besides, parents can also educate their children in case if they make mistakes. All in all, parents’ love and care can't replaced by anything. But no matter how busy parents are, never forgot to set aside some time for children.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My cousin Tom was attended a pool party when one of the boys was found at bottom of the pool. The another kids pulled the boy out and Tom found so that he wasn’t breathing. A passer-by noticed the situation but quickly called 120. However, he was too nervous to knowing what to do. Tom was calmly and he quickly began to perform CPR, an emergency lifesaving procedure, on the boy. It was his quick thinking and positive attitude which saved the boy’s life. Since the incident, Tom has been responsible with ensuring that all the student in his school are trained in first aid.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am pleased to hearing from you and I am writing to tell you something about Liuyi Club. Found in 2017, Liuyi Club is a students’ society on Chinese traditional culture, especial the Chinese calligraphy.
“Liuyi” means “the six arts”, the general term referring a variety of traditional Chinese arts. Since 2017,Liuyi Club had organized a good many of activities aimed at promoting traditional Chinese arts. Such events as Chinese calligraphy and painting competition is held regularly for students in the school. The club provides a platform what students can make friends with those who have much in common.
Through these activities, participant can improve their communication and teamwork abilities.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除∶把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改∶在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意∶ 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, we can see phubbers watching their mobile phones everywhere. They can' t stop sending messages, surfing the Internet, listening music and even taking photos by using the mobile phone.
Actually, phubbing disturbs not only our study and our life. On the one hand, phubbers waste plenty of time play cell phone games and sending message, particularly in the class. On the other, using the mobile phone for a long time can lead to healthy problems.
As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we put down the mobile phone and raise our heads up. Do cherish that is around us and appreciate the sceneries ahead of us. Only when we use the mobile phone reasonable, can you realize the happiness of life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧ ), 并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处, 多者 (从第 11处起 )不计分.
Hello, everyone! It is my honor to deliver a speech on keeping air clean. As is know to us, we humans can’t live without air, just as fish can’t live without water. However, the World Health Organization has recently announced a shocked study about the air we breathe. It has found that almost everyone on the earth breathe unhealthy air. The data is rough from 600 cities in 117 countries. The study shows that mostly of the world’s people breathe the air that it breaks WHO air quality limits. As a result, million of people die every scar because pollution - related diseases. Therefore, it was important for us to take action to solve the environment problems and keep the air clean.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Sometimes I get the feeling when living in a city makes people much lonely than before. People always feel stranger cannot be trusted. And that is not normal to start talking to anyone or even smile at someone. I want change this. Last week, I went skating. A man ran by smile. He said something to us about doing sports and that he hoped to be able to finish his run. I smiled back and said that he certain would. And today, a family cycled by when I am in the park. One of the girls waved at me with a smile, and I waved back enthusiastically. I believe such small gestures can change into the world we live in.