增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(____)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On-line voting becomes increasing popular, and many competitions get people involve in it. It is beneficial to some people, so it puts others into a dilemma over whether vote or not.
In my opinion, on-line voting is a inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is a way to participate in public life. There is no difference between on-line voting and ordinary voting events, in what candidates go around to seek support. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easier and more convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet make instant feedback possible.
To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because of they hate voting, but because we are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participations rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold attitude towards on-line voting.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词。
Most people in the United States don’t learn to speak the second language. High schools teach languages. And very few students learn to speak good. Why don’t Americans speak other languages?The United States are a very large country. Americans can travel a long distance and not leave the United States. They do not need learn a second language. And many people in other partof the world spoke English. If Americans travel to other countries, they can speak English in here, too. But some Americans think that is a mistake to speak English only. They believe it is very importantly to learn a second language.
As we all know it, health is very important to us students. Here are some tips on how to grow up healthily.
Some students at school were too addicted to phones and computers, which does harm to their health. Therefore, you are strong advised to rid you of them. In addition, sparing some time to build up your body on a regular basis to make you energetic and relaxing. Above all, attach importance on making friends and communicating with others. Taking active part in various voluntary activities can also be of great beneficial.
I hope that the suggestion above will make a difference.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
After the Spring Festival, there arises some hot topics, and lucky money is including as well. To collect opinions from the public, an online survey has made these days.
82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional custom, representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation. Besides, lucky money is the more attractive part for children, it forms the good memory of our childhood.
The rest, however, think bad of it. For one thing, the amount is grown bigger and bigger, making it a heavy load. For another, it has been a good excuse to bribe (贿赂) people in the power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.
Personally speaking, lucky money is nothing wrong. Only when we know its meaning can you send our hearty wishes to the young.
