增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
About how to keep healthy, I’d like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that can we keep fit.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分；
Nowadays, it is more and more difficulty for people to find jobs. Even graduates from key universities can’t find out suitable jobs. Here was some advice for those graduates.
Firstly, as an university graduate, you must know well about yourself, your knowledge, your ability and your hobbies including. Secondly, you’d better study about the job you want to do, what will be helpful to us in finding a good job. Thirdly, get ready for your interview carefully that you can behave well. Besides, introducing yourself to others properly and show your advantages to them are necessary. God is always to provide chances with those who are prepared.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Steven,
From your letter, I know it is hard for you to make friends. The following advice may be for some help to you.
To begin with, walking to your classmates and talk with them. After several talk you will happy find that they ate likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually, you will enjoy each other company. Besides, you’d better to give them a hand when they are in trouble. It is advisable to participate in different kind of activities, which you can communicate with different people.
All in al if you follow my advice above, you would find that it isn’t big deal to make some friends.
Yours,
Jack
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Steven ,
From you letter , I know it is hard for you to make friends. The following suggestions may be for some help to you.
To begin with , walking to your classmates and talk with them. After several talks , you will happy find that they are likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually , you will enjoy each other company. Besides , you,d better to give them a hand when they are inn trouble. It is advisable to participate in different kind of activities , which you can communicate with different people.
All in all , follow my advice above , and you would find that it isn,t big deal to make some friends.
Yours ,
Jack
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。
We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of it correctly and wisely. First, some of us are upset with their body figures and looks. It’s necessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care for it. It is one’s inner beauty which matters. Second, we sometime seem to be misunderstood by our the teachers, parents and classmates. Facing this, we can find a properly time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, try to remove the misunderstanding. Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. All we need to do is to encourage ourselves work harder, full of determination.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
What is a motto? It s something that has a special mean. I have a super motto, which work like magic. That is “Just do your best”. My motto is very helpful to me. The other day, I had important test. Unfortunate, I was sick. I was scaring and nervous. I told me “Just do your best”. Then I tried on my best but finally I did a great job.
Don’t worry about that will happen and don’t compare yourself with other peoples. Nothing is impossible if you do your best.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear friends,
Do you want to live in a beautifully world? If so, this is our duty to protect the environment.
We can just started from little things around us. First, we can stick to habit of walking to school instead of take a car or a bus. Second, it’s also importance to reuse everything and value our school’s environment by picking up rubbish and turning on the lights. Besides, it is necessary what we should protect flowers and trees. And also by growing different plant, we can make our world green. Let’s all to take action now and try our best to protect the environment.
Thank you!
8 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A man requested on a wise man to help his son quit his bad habits. The wise man took the boy for walk in a garden. Stopping sudden he asked the boy to pull out a tiny plant. The boy held the plant between his thumb and forefingers and pulled it out. The man then asked him to pull out another plant which was slightly big. The boy pulled hard and the plant came up. “Now pull out that one,” said the man point to a bush. The boy tired his best but couldn’t pull it out. “So it is with bad habits” said the wise man. “When you are young, it is easy to pull them out, though when they take hold, they can be uprooted.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the growing popularity of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies.
Comparing with online games, many traditional games, like hide-and-seek, benefits kids mentally and physically. They were ever popular with several generations, which not only learned anything valuable but also enjoyed playing the games. Therefore, the games are dying away now.
Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children’s Internet time. Let children to know the harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. Help children judge healthy and unhealthy games. What’s more, we should often organize events for children in which traditional games played.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily
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