增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As senior high students, we are on busy schedule every day, burdened with heavy study and involving in various after-school activities. Therefore, time management seems essential, without what work delay and study stress will be unavoidable. So how to plan it successfully? Make a to-do list is on top recommendation. List things we are going to do them and plan the time taken up by each task, and things will be done accordingly. Second, do one thing at one time. Concentration guarantees efficiency and the former task’s accomplishment usually helps the next go smooth. That’s because I strongly recommend time management here. I believe we can live our senior high life to its full because that.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)， 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, an increasing number of people have trouble falling asleep and suffer from lack of sleep, lead to serious health problems.
Definitely, a good sleep can restore our physical strength what is needed to get refreshed for the day ahead. On the contrary, lack of sleep can result in poor outcomes, absent of mind, memory loss and low spirits including. Consequently, effective approaches should put forward to address the issues.
Firstly, we should lay a efficient learning plan and strike a balance between your study and rest. Secondly, remove our phones or other screens before going to bed. Lastly, creating a sleep-friendly environment can be of extremely helpful. Something as simply as a comfortable pillow can do wonders.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Living a low carbon life is becoming increasing important in our modern society. It means reduce the amount of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases we released into the atmosphere. There are many simple steps we can take them. Firstly, we can choose eco-friendly modes of transportation such as walking, cycling, or using public transport instead driving. Secondly, saving energies in our homes is crucial. Switching off lights when they are not in use but using energy-efficient appliances (电器) make a significance impact. Lastly, consuming less meat and dairy products, that have a high carbon footprint, and opting for organic produce can make a different.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone should take the action to reduce haze (雾霾), which is harmless to our health. First of all, I believe that if we plant more tree, there will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes (尾气) from cars, thus reduce pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens ride bikes if they make short journeys.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Let me make a suggestion to help you deal with difficult situation. If, for example, you are taking part at a sports competition or meeting someone important, you will probably be quite nervous. And you will worry that you won’t as successfully as you would like to be. What we need to do are prepare yourself thoroughly by running through the whole activity over and over again in your mind, carefully going through every detail. For example, a famous pianist, put in the prison for seven years for political reasons, can still play wonderfully when he was set free. When asking how he managed to play so well, his explanation was what he had practiced every day in his mind.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Like other natural disaster, hurricanes can strike in many places. Thus, no matter where you live in, you may be at risk. As matter of fact, whether it’s the first time you’ve weathered a storm, or you’ve grown up in a hurricane area, know how to prepare for a hurricane is quite important. It usually mean the difference between major destruction or minor wind damage. To stay safely during hurricanes, you’d better planned ahead. For example, you can sign up for flood insurance, check the roof, putting away the outdoor items and so on. The hurricane-prep tips will give them peace of mind when the disaster strikes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, I’ve read a book on how to survive in the wild. I was especially impressing with the part about dealing with wild animals. If you’re out on the hike and see a wild animal, you shouldn’t approach them, unless you’re an experienced naturalist! Animals in the wild is not used to people and may react defensively, even if you didn’t intend to harm them. The advice is to stay calm and walk quiet in a different direction so you don’t risk of being hurt. You should stay around only if you’re absolutely sure the animal is harmful. Either be ready fight if the animal attacks you, nor run away!
Everybody needs have friends in life. But being a friend can sometime be hard work. Learn how to solve problems in friendship can make you a better friend and a happier person. An universal problem between friends is that they don’t know why to talk with each other about difficult things. When they are talking, they often get madly with each other. What can they do? It took time to learn how to communicate well, and it is important to understand why a friend gets angry to you when you say something. If you know which makes your friend angry, and you can try to talk about the problem in a different way.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt that cell phones play a important part in our daily life. However, be addicted to cell phones does a lot of harms to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cellphone, your head as well as your neck ache, which will have a bad effect to your daily life. Beside, on your way home or to school, with your attention fully focus on the cell phone, you may fail to notice the traffic around us, which will be a great danger to you. Therefore, I strong suggest that everyone would use our cell phones wisely.
