增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Like other natural disaster, hurricanes can strike in many places. Thus, no matter where you live in, you may be at risk. As matter of fact, whether it’s the first time you’ve weathered a storm, or you’ve grown up in a hurricane area, know how to prepare for a hurricane is quite important. It usually mean the difference between major destruction or minor wind damage. To stay safely during hurricanes, you’d better planned ahead. For example, you can sign up for flood insurance, check the roof, putting away the outdoor items and so on. The hurricane-prep tips will give them peace of mind when the disaster strikes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt that cell phones play a important part in our daily life. However, be addicted to cell phones does a lot of harms to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cellphone, your head as well as your neck ache, which will have a bad effect to your daily life. Beside, on your way home or to school, with your attention fully focus on the cell phone, you may fail to notice the traffic around us, which will be a great danger to you. Therefore, I strong suggest that everyone would use our cell phones wisely.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt whether campus security is very significant.However, there are some potential problems on campus and the campus security was being threatened.
Therefore, we should go all out to keep it safe.First of all, the school should hire more responsibly gatekeepers but adopt some strategies to prevent the social people from coming into the campus.In addition, the school is supposed to organize some activitiy for students to increase their safe consciousness and offer them some tips on how to protect them.In the general, campus security is such important that it needs all of us to work together.With everyone do their parts, it will make a big difference.And finally, it will be great benefit for students' well-rounded development and healthy growth.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi, everyone! I’m glad to stand here to talk about how we can do for our school. We all know that a small act is going to makes a big difference. First of all, we can easily make our school more beautifully. For example, every one of them can take care of a tree or to organize a thorough cleaning in the school. We can pick up rubbishes on the floor or put it into the trash cans. In the end, never forgot to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. Don’t leave the water run or waste any food while we are eating in the dining rooms. If we can do so, I believe we’ll turn our school into much better place!
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
Dear Mike,
Knowing from your letter that your class team lose the basketball game last week and you have been feeling rather depressing, I am writing to cheer you up.
Everybody loses sometimes, and that doesn’t mean they will never win. I know your feeling now, but hopeful, you can take it easy. In your life you can’t avoid failure, but it is your attitude towards failure really counts. Cherish failure, as it makes me stronger and wiser.
I advise you communicate with your teammates and reflect on this game, finding your problems, making adjustments and train harder. With determination and hard works, you will win in time.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of society and economy, the number of private cars are increasing at a surprising speed. As we all know it, cars give off poisonous gas, cause global warming, frequent natural disasters, diseases and so on. In order to protecting our environment, it is high time that we should go green.
Firstly, we should raise people’s aware of the importance of going green. Secondly, using public transportation can make great difference to the problem what is caused by private cars. Additional, we shouldn’t waste water, energy or food and so on. At last, on our daily life it is a good idea to classify and recycle rubbishes.
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn’t know how to get rid of it. Therefore, I am writing to offer you with some suggestions.
First of all, that is quite common for high school students to feel depressing sometimes. Which really matters is that you should face your problem and make up your mind to settle it. The most effectively way is to turn to teachers for help. They will surely provide you with useful and practical advices. Besides, take an active part in sports or you’ll feel more energetic than before. Hang out with friends is also good way to relax yourself.
I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Like other natural disaster, hurricanes can strike in many places. Thus, no matter where you live in, you may be at risk. As a matter of fact, whether it’s first time you’ve weathered a storm, or you’ve grown up in a hurricane area, know how to prepare for a hurricane is quite important. It usually mean the difference between major destruction or minor wind damage. To stay safely during hurricanes, you’d better planned ahead. For example, you can sign up for flood insurance, check the roof, putting away the outdoor items and so on. The hurricane-prep tips will give them peace of mind when the disaster strikes.
