增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Like other natural disaster, hurricanes can strike in many places. Thus, no matter where you live in, you may be at risk. As matter of fact, whether it’s the first time you’ve weathered a storm, or you’ve grown up in a hurricane area, know how to prepare for a hurricane is quite important. It usually mean the difference between major destruction or minor wind damage. To stay safely during hurricanes, you’d better planned ahead. For example, you can sign up for flood insurance, check the roof, putting away the outdoor items and so on. The hurricane-prep tips will give them peace of mind when the disaster strikes.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt that cell phones play a important part in our daily life. However, be addicted to cell phones does a lot of harms to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cellphone, your head as well as your neck ache, which will have a bad effect to your daily life. Beside, on your way home or to school, with your attention fully focus on the cell phone, you may fail to notice the traffic around us, which will be a great danger to you. Therefore, I strong suggest that everyone would use our cell phones wisely.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt whether campus security is very significant.However, there are some potential problems on campus and the campus security was being threatened.
Therefore, we should go all out to keep it safe.First of all, the school should hire more responsibly gatekeepers but adopt some strategies to prevent the social people from coming into the campus.In addition, the school is supposed to organize some activitiy for students to increase their safe consciousness and offer them some tips on how to protect them.In the general, campus security is such important that it needs all of us to work together.With everyone do their parts, it will make a big difference.And finally, it will be great benefit for students' well-rounded development and healthy growth.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi, everyone! I’m glad to stand here to talk about how we can do for our school. We all know that a small act is going to makes a big difference. First of all, we can easily make our school more beautifully. For example, every one of them can take care of a tree or to organize a thorough cleaning in the school. We can pick up rubbishes on the floor or put it into the trash cans. In the end, never forgot to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. Don’t leave the water run or waste any food while we are eating in the dining rooms. If we can do so, I believe we’ll turn our school into much better place!
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Like other natural disaster, hurricanes can strike in many places. Thus, no matter where you live in, you may be at risk. As a matter of fact, whether it’s first time you’ve weathered a storm, or you’ve grown up in a hurricane area, know how to prepare for a hurricane is quite important. It usually mean the difference between major destruction or minor wind damage. To stay safely during hurricanes, you’d better planned ahead. For example, you can sign up for flood insurance, check the roof, putting away the outdoor items and so on. The hurricane-prep tips will give them peace of mind when the disaster strikes.
增加:把缺词处加一个漏符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than writing on the paper. However, our handwriting is not as good as it is in the past. Face the problem, we should do as follows:
First, we should use more electric products when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practising calligraphy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letter to our relatives and friends by the hand instead of sending e-mails.
Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit to us students. So let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will paid off.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
How nice to hear of you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advices.
As we know, the College Entrance Examination is not only a test of our knowledge and of our body. At the same time, we teenagers grow very fast, what requires plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat, and beans, especial fresh vegetables and fruits. You’d better not to eat too much sweet. Also, you were supposed to take physical exercise regularly instead studying in the classroom all the time. For example, you can play basketball or swim after school. What’s more, have enough sleep is very important. Because I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late. Only in this way can you keep fit.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr Wesley,
How is everything going? I am writing to ask if or not you can do me a favor.
Having heard that our school will hold an English speech contest which theme is “my dream”, which many a student want to take part in, I also have strong desire to participate. I am firmly convinced that not only can I improve my speaking English, but also I can become more confident. However, I have no idea what should serve for the content of my speech. Therefore, I also feel puzzled about how to express me fluently and vividly in English. Could you be such kind as to give me some useful suggestions?
I will feel very much grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua