增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is no doubt whether campus security is very significant.However, there are some potential problems on campus and the campus security was being threatened.
Therefore, we should go all out to keep it safe.First of all, the school should hire more responsibly gatekeepers but adopt some strategies to prevent the social people from coming into the campus.In addition, the school is supposed to organize some activitiy for students to increase their safe consciousness and offer them some tips on how to protect them.In the general, campus security is such important that it needs all of us to work together.With everyone do their parts, it will make a big difference.And finally, it will be great benefit for students' well-rounded development and healthy growth.
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn’t know how to get rid of it. Therefore, I am writing to offer you with some suggestions.
First of all, that is quite common for high school students to feel depressing sometimes. Which really matters is that you should face your problem and make up your mind to settle it. The most effectively way is to turn to teachers for help. They will surely provide you with useful and practical advices. Besides, take an active part in sports or you’ll feel more energetic than before. Hang out with friends is also good way to relax yourself.
I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Like other natural disaster, hurricanes can strike in many places. Thus, no matter where you live in, you may be at risk. As a matter of fact, whether it’s first time you’ve weathered a storm, or you’ve grown up in a hurricane area, know how to prepare for a hurricane is quite important. It usually mean the difference between major destruction or minor wind damage. To stay safely during hurricanes, you’d better planned ahead. For example, you can sign up for flood insurance, check the roof, putting away the outdoor items and so on. The hurricane-prep tips will give them peace of mind when the disaster strikes.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now million of people are suffering hunger while tons of food are being wasted. So it is a honor for me to speak here with the theme of “Say no to food waste”.
Food waste has huge impacts. Not only does it waste energy, but also it contribute to global warming once throw out into the landfills. Thankfully, our efforts have made to deal with the issue. We can help prevent food waste by adopting to food conservation strategies daily. When cooking at home we should careful plan meals and not cook more than which is needed. We should order only according to their needs and take the leftovers home before eating outside. It’s high time that we took action!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Rope skipping is a sport suitable for people of all age. People skip for fun and exercise.
Every student are able to learn to skip. You can skip alone or with your classmates. If you skip alone, you will need short rope about double the length of your high. You should turn your rope slowly so that you can skip safe. It might help with if you can sing a rhyme while skip. When you skip, your heart beats fast than usual and your body is stressed. Therefore, stop for a rest before you injure yours.
So, pick up a rope, finding a silly rhyme and start skipping.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr Wesley,
How is everything going? I am writing to ask if or not you can do me a favor.
Having heard that our school will hold an English speech contest which theme is “my dream”, which many a student want to take part in, I also have strong desire to participate. I am firmly convinced that not only can I improve my speaking English, but also I can become more confident. However, I have no idea what should serve for the content of my speech. Therefore, I also feel puzzled about how to express me fluently and vividly in English. Could you be such kind as to give me some useful suggestions?
I will feel very much grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Honesty, considering as a good quality, is of vital important. Honest people win respect while a liar is looked down because dishonesty results in distrust and even ruins one’s name. So how to be the honest student? Firstly, don’t copy homeworks or cheat in the exam. Beside, you’d better to keep your promise and try to do things well. More importantly, tell the truth instead of lies. Only in this way can you make progress in your studies and made more friends. If you’re honest with other, you’ll be treated the same way. There is no doubt whether honest students will have a bright future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, world heritage sites are significant in history. However, at present, it’s reported that some world heritage sites are in the danger, which has aroused public attention. We’ve found that some sites are being seriously damaging, which is very sad to us. As far as I am concerned, it is pollution and tourism which contribute to the problem. So something must be done to protecting the heritage sites. Foremost, we should remind people to raise our awareness of protection. Apart from this, the government recommends that everyone plays a role in protecting them because they are our precious treasure. In a word, actions speak loud than words. Apparent, it is of vital important to take action and do something. Only doing so can things be improved.
