增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, a tree planting activity held, which our whole school took an active part in. We set off at 7:00 a.m., and it took them around two hours to get to the planting site. Upon arrival, where came into sight were different varieties of young trees. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for digging holes, and the others for planting young trees. On our face flowed down sweat together with heartfelt smiles and all of us spent a meaningfully weekend. Now seeing to the lines of trees, we have a better understanding of how hard a job is and how precious the trees are. However, we should treasure the trees planted and making efforts to better our world.
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Today, my family and I went hiking in the mountain where is rich in wildlife. We had a great time explored the beautiful scenery. We set out early in the morning, full equipped with snacks and water. During the climb, we watch the wildlife and took many photo. Besides, we have had a picnic lunch at the top of the mountain and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings.
Personally, I felt a great sense of satisfaction after succeeding reaching the top. Though tiring, I considered them worth my time. Spending time with family in nature brought us much close to each other.
The environment pollution was more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been great affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of diseases causing by pollution. In order to live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world. We should recycle, reduce and reuse things, what saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bag. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting it down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Kevin,
I am so grateful to have a wonderful teacher like you. Under your careful guidance last year, I made a rapid progress in English. The encouraged atmosphere in your class helped me voice my opinions freely, that has greatly enhanced my speaking fluency.
For further improvement, I hope to interact with you less in class. Discussions in pairs or groups does help us, but your timely feedback can allow us to improve your learning effect. What’s more, it is thoughtfully of you to speak slowly. So the faster speed which you talk with other native speakers may better sharpen our listening skills.
I sincerely hope these suggestion will be useful. Looking forward to your wonderful lessons next semester.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误; 2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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I really appreciate this experience as it raised my aware of white pollution. I'd avoid use plastics and urge others to do the same. Like a famous saying goes, many hands make light work. So let's start from us and act from now on.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I discovered the joy of playing table tennis when I enter high school. At first, I was hesitant to try the sport, but after watching a few excited matches, I was attracted. I started practicing with friends and soon joined in a local club. I spent countless hours perfecting my skills or learning new strategies. My hard work paid back when I won my first tournament, what inspired me to work harder. Play table tennis became a way for me to forget the pressure of high school. It also taught us valuable lessons about teamwork and hard works. Though I’ve graduated, I will always treasure memories of those days.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Notice
In order to make our school life more colorful, an English Drama Festival will be hold at 7 o’clock in the evening of December 20th in our school theater. The details are as the follows.
To start with, each class will perform a five-minute short play in a giving order. Some of them are adapted while others are created by student, which are expected be meaningful. A lecture will follow, introduce us to features of the plays. Please arrive on time or mute your phone in the theatre.
Undoubtedly, it will be a really feast for the English drama lovers, so come join them and enjoy the festival!
The Student Union
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, I was taking the walk in my neighbourhood. There was a great many dogs playing around. I noticed a small one which hairs were pure white. It was a smart dog I couldn’t take my eye off. At that moment a little boy came up and wanted to play with him. Never before had the dog saw the boy, so it started to run after him or barked. In panic, the boy begged the dog not bite him. It was so much lucky that the dog’s owner soon took it away. Now, I still have no idea when the small dog suddenly attacked him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Several days before, my English teacher told us that there was going to have an English speech competition in our school. One student from each class would be selected for competition. Its theme was about protect the wild animals. It was such a wonderful topic what I became very interested in them. Afterwards, I searched for a lot of useful information on the Internet. I wrote a speech but presented it to my classmates. Luckily, I was given for the opportunity to enter the final. Then I practiced hardly under my teacher’s guidance. In the end, I make it and won the first prize.