增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The China Tourism Academy released a report say that education tourism has become popular between people of all ages. The development of education tourism promotes the socially education of primary and middle school students, which has also played a important role in blending culture and tourism. The key difference between study travel and other tourism product is that study travel focus on learning while traveling. Study travel dates back the Song and Ming dynasties, where many poets wrote of our experiences on study travels.
Dai Bin, president of the Chinese Tourism Academy, suggested that China would establish national campsites for study travel at places with beautiful natural views and rich cultural heritage.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jim is one of my close friend. Two months ago, his mother buy a computer for him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard under the help of the computer. To his surprise, Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computer scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is what we should use it wisely.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am used to reading English classics in our spare time. I always enjoy myself following the stories and communicate with the characters. Personally, reading English classics are of great benefit to students. Firstly, it can made us really interested in English learning because of we are often attracted by the touching plots. Also, it broadens our horizons as it like traveling through time and space, where is a good way to learn more about the world. Additionally, we will definite improve ourselves by reading English classics. Namely, those good quality in the characters will shape one into a good person than now. Just have a try!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I enjoy learning English but can remember individual words easy. However, when it comes to reading comprehension, it’s really the challenge. Last weekend, I tried to read a storybook write in English to improve my reading. At first, I refer to the dictionary every time I came across a new word, which I found it not very helpful. I often felt puzzling about what I had read. Then I tried to finish a chapter completely with looking up the new words. What surprised me was I could understand the story merely from the context. I hope I will make great progresses in English in this way.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Father’s Day. Having been finished my homework, I together with my sister went to buy some vegetables as well as a gift as planned. We were supposed to giving our father a big surprise. On our way home, we met with Grandpa Li, an old neighbour without children. Suddenly, I came up an idea. Then we went to his home with what we had bought. With his help, we cooked a delicious meal. After that we made a phone call to our parents but told them that we will have lunch at Grandpa Li’s. Hearing what we had done, we were very pleased, saying we were really caring. We helped Grandpa Li do a thorough clean after lunch. Tiredly as we were, we felt we had spent a meaning day. I believe it is a day when will be remembered by me forever in my future life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a warm autumn day when my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom, we were led to my dormitory by volunteer. Altogether I had five roommate, two of whom arrived later. I got to know my new roommates immediate. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father, but he had to leave for my hometown in the evening. I suddenly realized he had grown up and that I had to looking after myself or live independently. Then I knew my senior high school life had real begun.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the development of technology, more and more students prefer to use electric products for taking notes and sending messages, rather than writing on the paper. However, our handwriting is not as good as it is in the past. Face the problem, we should do as follows:
First, we should use more electric products when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practising calligraphy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letter to our relatives and friends by the hand instead of sending e-mails.
Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit to us students. So let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will paid off.
增加: 在缺词处加个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With my college life approach, in order to get used to college life quickly, I should prepared myself for that from now on. To begin with, when entering into college, I will set new goals for my studies and stick to it until I succeed. What’s more, since I’m away from home, it is necessary for me learn to live independently. In my spare time, I will take part in a variety of activity. Additionally, getting along with my classmates and teachers at college are another challenge for me, and for sure I’ll make it. I have a strong belief what my college life will be absolute wonderful.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Karl,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to share you a brilliant thing.
I win the first prize in the Music Star Festival to held by my school last week. The song I sang was the Red Sun by David Lee. I chose a song because of the inspiration it took me. Every time I enjoy it I feel something warmth flowing in my heart. I can’t emphasize the importance of others’ encouragement too much. Not only can they make me happy, but also can encourage me to keep moving. When I were under pressure, I choose to listen to the song and catch my breathe.
I do hope you also like the song. Do you have any songs that encourage you? Looking forward to you early reply.
Yours,
Jack
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As senior high school students, we often imagine which we will do in the future. For me, I expect be a Chinese teacher working in an English-speaking country.
First, I’m an outgoing boy without great patience. Besides, I had a good command of Chinese. Also, I can speak fluently English, which is a must-have skill to communicate with the children that native language is English. In the addition, teachers are generally respected. However, what is the most important for you to take up this job is that I can share Chinese culture and customs with foreigner. I can also help them have a better understanding of China by done such a job.
