增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Monday morning, I was cycling along a street in the rush hour on my way an interview for an important job. A yellow car passed by me and sudden stopped. I had to brake my bike hard but of course, I fall. I was such angry that I stopped the driver and kept on shout at him rudely. Fortunately, I was in time for the interview. By a chance, one of my interviewer, the manager of the company, was just the driver of the yellow car. Luckily, the manager was not angry with me for my rude. Instead, he offered me the job. So I said to everyone jokingly that I could tell my manager how I thought of him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It’s important to be a student with good manner in our daily life.
Last Monday morning, I went to school by bus with Liu ‘Tao whom is my classmate. There were much people on the bus. When an old woman got on the bus at the next stop, Liu Tao stood up and gave his seat her. The old woman thanked Lu ‘Tao for his kind. I thought Liu Tao was very polite.
But sometime I see some bad manners around them. For example, some people pushed in before others or drop litter everywhere. As students, we should behave good when we are in public places. And we should lend a helping hand when we see someone in the need.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At present the computer is playing a important role in our daily life. By use the computer, we are able to learn about some other information as well as news both home and abroad. We can also make phone calls, send messages by e-mail, go to net schools, but learn foreign languages by yourselves. Besides, it can make us to enjoy music, watch sports matches, and play chess or cards. The computer can even help us do some shopping online, have a chat and makes friends with strangers, who greatly improves our living level. In a words, since it appeared, our life has become much easy than before.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week I went to a movie, which was very moved. It was a sadly movie about a mother and her son. When the boy was little, his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich person whom had no children. The boy receives a very good education and twenty year later he became a doctor. In the hospital, he had a patient. She was an old lady. He did not care too much about her, for she could hardly pay for the medical care. One evening, the lady died quietly of a serious illness and on her bed the doctor found letter. In it she discovered the truth and felt like the love of a great mother. He wanted to call her mother, but it was too late. Everybody in the theatre were close to tears.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently I found a donation box in my neighborhood. People come to them when they have old clothes, bags, newspapers and books to donate. This box, I think, was of great significance. My mother buys for me a lot of clothes, and I grow so fast. Much clothes don’t fit me any longer. I’ve got no idea what to deal with the clothes which are real new and still in good condition. However, with this donation box, I can help those people in needs. In a word, I do think it is a good idea that light up our life and makes the world better place to live in .
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My name is Jane. I want be a journalist. Journalists have to be very independently, and they need many different skill. Communicating on well with people is especially required, what I believe I'm good at. Also I liked travelling and doing challenging things. I think work for a newspaper and reporting from all over the world are really exciting. My parents think being a journalist is the dangerous job, but I'm not scared. I like taking risks. They know I won't make a lot of money and bringing news to people around the world will be enough.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Feeling upset and annoyed, I decided to go on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last winter, the smog occurred a lot of time. It brought much inconvenience to our daily life or did great harm to our health. Many traffic accidents had happened just because of the heavy smog weather. In addition, quite a lot of flights had to put off and a great number of people stayed at home to keep them away from the harmful air. Some people suffered of bad coughs, sore throats and other serious diseases cause by the smog. I think whomever lives on the earth should try to play the part in the environmental protection. I support the idea that we can try to drive more and buy environmentally friendly products to improve the air quality.