增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I really like animals. When I grow up, I’ll work with animals. Though I don’t know exact what I can do for the animals yet, but I can at least follow my brother. He is a excellent vet. He looks after frightened snakes. He says that snakes are easy to deal as they don’t have any legs. My father, a scientist, works to save rare bird, some of that are really clever and can even say some words. My mother trains dolphins every workday. They practise in the pool. She hears the dolphins talk and sang. That sounds really cool! There are so many animal jobs to choosing from, but which one is right for them? I’ll have to wait and see!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With time pass by, I will be 18 years old. In other words, I will be a adult. What I want to express most is certainly my appreciate. First of all, I must thank for my parents, with which care and love I have grown up happily. What's more, I am quite gratefully to the dear teachers I had ever met. It is the teachers have taught me what should be done. Last but not least, having such many lovely friends makes my life quite meaningful and helps you realize the importance of sharing happiness and sorrows with others. I am sure that I will be better with the love given by others.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both work in same office. They often walk together to and from work. Once they were walking to home together while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly opened his umbrella and said proud, “My wife really has great foresight(先见之明). She said this morning it would rain and tell me to carry my umbrella. ”Dick smiled and walked up to him under the protection of the umbrella, said, “Mine has even great foresight. She didn’t let me carry it as she knew you’d share yours to me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jim,
Delighted to have received your email asking for my advices on which university to choose, I am trying to offer you with some suggestions.
As I have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is your better choice. Knowing for its language and culture courses intended for international students, the university is an ideal place, which I believe you will have a rewarding experience. Since it is not easy task to live in a different culture, I think it will be beneficial of you to learn some basic Chinese before you come. That way, you may adjust to live here as soon as possible.
Hopefully, my suggestions will be of some help to you and I believed you will achieve your dream.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)花掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Rowing boats are always a fun activity for me. Last summer I went to Hainan with my father and spent a week there. We stayed in a hotel which was short distance from the sea. On the five day, my father hired a boat. Look around, I found there were not many more boats on the sea. I wanted to row of my own, but my father was afraid to let us do that. He didn't agree unless later a boatman came and helpfully taught me how to row. I was very pride when I was finally able to row the boats and keep it on course.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Boys and girls, attention, please. I have anything to say. It’s a good news that our school is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, that is to welcome our Canadian friends. The party will be interested. You can dance, listen to music, sing songs and playing games. Would you like to bring a gift by you? Then you can send to your new foreign friend. Please write a few word that can express your best wishes. Anyone who want to attend the party can go to the great hall on the second floor. Everyone is welcome. I hope everyone will have a wonderfully time.
That’s all. Thank you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)花掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to Shapotou in last weekend. Having told about the history of Ning Xia, he was amazing at this wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the mixture of sand and water. I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activities of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and sign her name. Both Shapotou and the Ning Xia people deep impressed him so he decides to visit more places of interest when free.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
About 9 o'clock last night, I am doing my homework. Sudden I heard my neighbor shout and laughing loudly. He was watching the football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying and become impatient. I covered my ear, trying to keep the noise out, and it was no use. So I had to go to my neighbor’s house. I knocked at door and said, "Good evening, Mr Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework." "Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed with you. We’ll do like you say" My neighbor said politely. "Thank you very much." I said and went back to continue my study.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is known that some students cheat in exams. There are three reason for it. First of all, there are so many exams. Beside, the exams given are difficulty in some way. Secondly, some students have to cheat in exams because of they are too lazy. The last reason is to please our parents and teachers. For some students, low marks brought them great pressure and make them depressing.
In my opinion, cheating in exams are wrong. We should take positive attitude to our studies, and try to get a mark what is true as well as good.
