1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to the seaside to spend my summer holiday with my family in last year. We stayed there for about two weeks. The weather was much hot than that in my hometown, but I got used to it. Every morning, I get up early and went for breakfast ahead of time. Then I went the beach and talked with John which was my new friend. I came across her on my first morning there. John were warm-hearted and he seemed to be very familiarly with the seaside village. Sooner we became very good friends. We have kept write to each other ever since then.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
How have you been lately? You said you want to know about the Great Wall. I’m happily to tell you about them here. The Great Wall was build more than two thousand years ago. It is 8,851.8 kilometers long, six to seven meters high but four to five meters wide. The Great Wall, that represents the long history of China, is great wonder created to protect the ancient Chinese people. Now the Great Wall have become one of the most famous attractions in China, and it attracts a large number of visitor from all around the world each year.
I hope you can come to China to visit the Great Wall on one day. I’m sure you will love it.
Yours,
Zhang Hong
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Zhou Yang will never forgot his first assignment at the office of China Daily. At the first time Hu Xin, his new boss, sent him with a experienced reporter and a photographer to cover the story. Before went out to work, his boss told her to be curious and must have a “nose” for the story. In order to grasp the detailed facts Zhou Yang should listen the interviewee carefully. His boss also was advised him to prepare the next question depending on that the person said. His boss told that he can use a small recorder to get the facts straight, if permitting by the interviewee. Finally it can be used to judge if the interviewed person is lying or not.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
The person which has taught me the most about life is my grandmother. My parents did a lot of travelling when I was young so I spent a couple of my school holiday with her. She was more than just a mother to me and when she die a few years ago. I felt I lost a real good friend. She was so a thoughtful person. She knew how much I missed my parents and he did everything she could to make me feel at the home. She was also really imaginative but spent hours telling me interested stories that she had made up. I’m sure it was because her that I became a writer.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I visited Mountain Tai with several classmate today. We arrived at the foot of Mountain Tai on half past nine and spend nearly one hour in climbing. We could see flowers and grass all the way up and the air in the mountain smelt very freshly. We did not feel tiring at all. When we got to the top, and we were all wet with sweat. We sat under a tall tree to have rest, drinking some water and eating anything. There were several temples in the mountain. We enjoyed the scenery for a long time because we had never seen it ago. It were really a beautiful mountain.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：将多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents were until I enter high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
7 . 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nancy, aged 65, is a special friend of me. I like chatting with her but she enjoys my company. We talk about everything and kept no secrets from each other. It’s nice of her give me so much wise advice, from that I have benefited a lot. Last Saturday I visited her as usually. When I knocked at the door, there was no answer. Looking through the window, I was shocking to see her lying on the floor. I called 120 at a once. Minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took her to the hospital. She thanked me for have saved her life. I was happy to have done that.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I went on a hike with one of my best friend, Kevin. I got up early that morning and prepare lots of food in my lunchbox and then I went Kevin’s home to pick him up. On the way to the mountain, we enjoyed at seeing many beautiful flowers along the road. After we arrived at the mountain, all of us couldn’t help admire the natural scenery. Then he suggested that we should had a race between us, what made me excited too. So I agreed immediately. In an hurry, Kevin tripped on a stone and fell all the way down. Luckily, he got stuck on a tree and I pulled her up at last. What a day!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to the zoo with Lily on yesterday. There was lots of people there. I found a girl crying in the zoo. She was lost and she couldn’t found her mother. We decided to helping her. I tried my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. At the same time Lily played with the little girl but looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last her mother came, that made me feel very happy. I thought I really did a well thing. Unless everyone helps each other, the world will become more beautiful.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
